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Thank you for the feedback; honestly, I didn't notice it at first, but after re-reading the chapter, I also think that the way I portrayed Dawn is a bit lacking. So, I was thinking of doing a revision later (like always). See, as I was writing the chapter earlier, I wanted to make their interaction sweet and lovely, like how Blue Dragon did. However, I can't copy-paste the canon considering the difference in the timeline. Second, my writing style is just different. Anyway, as I was saying, I wanted to make their interaction sweet, pure, yada-yada, but at the same time, I wanted to keep it as natural as possible.
He would later, but I'm going to make it more complicated.
No NTR!
ah that's right. ty for reminders.
Harem is unrealistic... but dating two like the OG at the same time should be fine.
MC was much more mature than OG Ben, he knew that he couldn't change some characters, so he decided to move on and stop wasting time on them
No spoiler, but yep, no NTR.