The writing quality is good but the story makes you lose brain cells. Turn off your brain if you want to read it. It’s ok until he randomly changes universe for no good reason and immediately get attached to rimuru. Also his personality changes every chapter.

You should use a program like grammarly or something. It’s free and makes reading your stories much easier :)

Bro….. lmao

Same :/. Pure paiiiiiinnnnnnn. Where will I read trash novels i can distain from the bottom of my heart but still read cuz i have nothing else to do…. (This story is not included in that list)

Nah you good. I wasn’t berating him tho. I was just helping him. I didn’t think i’d be considered rude.

This is a not his story! He copied it from someone on scribblehub! Check out the original here https://www.scribblehub.com/series/437465/other-world-chimera-naruto-fanfic/

Thanks :)

Omg no way!!!! I thought for sure yuna’s adventure would end! I’m so happy it isn’t! I can’t wait to see Yuna’s crazy heavenly ice divine zanpakuto.. :)

Hey were did you get your dover picture?? It’s amazing!

This was an excellent story. I’ve been reading since before 20 chapters have dropped everyday and it honestly was my favourite part of the day sometimes. Watching the adventures of Yuna xD. It’s kinda sad to see it end but also just… right? Yeah lol. Alright have a good time man and good luck in your future works!!

This was an excellent story. I’ve been reading since before 20 chapters have dropped everyday and it honestly was my favourite part of the day sometimes. Watching the adventures of Yuna xD. It’s kinda sad to see it end but also just… right? Yeah lol. Alright have a good time man and good luck in your future works!!

This novel is filled with advertising. You can’t enjoy the story at all because everytime you get immersed the next chapter is some dumb ads for other novels. Don’t bother with this novel

I see thanks 😊

Yeah it was really rushed but make sure not to complicate things to much. We tend to destroy the plot more when trying to fix it.

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Does this side story happen in the past or the future? (I’m not the smartest ik pls don’t hate me)

I need more!!! Your story is like a drug

I feel bad for you. You make amazing works but your fans are trash who argue your own story…

I can’t wait to read what you can come up with. ^^

As someone who has been here from the beginning it’s incredible to see this fanfic reach such a point. Continue your great work author-sama ^^