Azull
Quem sou eu? Apenas mais um leitor. Mas por que escrevo? Pois bem... Como leitor, procuro histórias que me satisfaçam, mas cheguei a um ponto em que as histórias que tens neste site já não me satisfaz
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For example, when he met the vampire girl, the first FMC, when he had that moment with her on the grass, I could visualize her so well... I could feel their feelings, because it was just their moment, just them, and with your own worries... In short, I'm just saying that isolated moments are very important in these kinds of stories, in the kind of multi-heroine stories that you're creating.
Sorry if it got a little long, I want to give my point of view as best I can, in the hope that I can help you in some way. If I have any complaints, it would be about how the story is picking up girls nonstop, with no time to better engage with the ones he already has. I'm not saying there isn't, but (in my humble opinion) there is less than there should be.
''Ninguém está achando graça aqui, irmão. Faz teu trabalho ai.'' kkkkkkkkk