JA_Chrysant
A hobbyist, a gamer (mobile, console, pc just bring it on baby), otaku, weabo, and vtuber simp.
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Wow, this sentence is too long. Please make it there sentences or more, it's easy to read that way
Wow so long, please make it two or three sentences, it helps the reader
Typo, do not use ' for a dialogue, but "
What a mood swing haha
Ups, you're using too much as if. Maybe use another phrase? Or simplify the paragraph?
Oh no death flag fufufu
Soldiered on? Wow, that's an uncommon word, still you can use it, but there is a better choice like pressed on or continued on etc
oh no, broke up the paragraph or shorten it 😊
Yess, I finally understand as I read the next chapter.
Well, unless she said something long, I think you don't have to separate her sentence in a dialogue. (The main reason is... it's a waste of space if you plan to print it hahaha)