Hell_in_Heaven
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I am getting Korean vibes out of it... or it's just only me. Oh well, let's get on the review. After reading a couple of chapters, I can say that it's 'worth your time'. The story development is nice from my perspective. But I do have an issue with the 'tags'. I AM UNABLE TO UNDERSTAND THEM. Keep it up by the way.👏👏
The plot setting and character development are good. A story about a woman taking the initiative to be something on her own is interesting. But do prioritize the editing over the releases to enhance the content quality. Minor grammatical errors do seem like nothing much but can be annoying in stories especially relating to 'character development'. One would love to bookmark it after a couple of tune-ups. Overall, the pacing and writing are good. Keep it up.👏👏
Thanks a lot for reading...
He finally calmed down...
He sure likes to die... XD!
Honestly, this is the first time reviewing the novel with this many POVs. It has its flaws as writing the first time isn't always perfect. But the story can't be judged as of yet. The POVs have some really fast transition but it isn't boring. You can call it a new way to read a story with unique story development. Having not many chapters, it is still hard to judge the work. Nevertheless, keep it up 👌
The story definitely has the feel to attract readers. Considering that this is a new story, the development gives the urge to read more. About the content quality and character design: There's a proper use of one's emotions, the MC, and the secondary characters are not just some 2D dimwits. Having a story of their own, the characters' design seems quite nice to me. And having good content quality is a plus. The updates are a bit slow but I do recommend others to give it a try.
The story definitely has the feel to attract readers. Considering that this is a new story, the development gives the urge to read more. About the content quality and character design: There's a proper use of one's emotions and feelings, MC, and the secondary characters are not just some 2D dimwits. Having a story of their own, the characters' design seems quite nice to me. And having good content quality is a plus. Suspense filled with love, hate, and despair... I do recommend others to give it a try.