lol dw :)

yes pls keep suggesting, I'm having trouble with commas and certain words ugh. I appreciate the corrections alot.

Thank you, about the world thing I was thinking the same a while back that I should put more details about it in there and I intend to do so. Also the character, I want her to be vague. Along the way you get to know her more. Thank you for reviewing.

I like the characters and how it shows how far Adiras come from, I really like the plot it's good, makes you want to know more about everything. This book is promising, keep up the good work hun 😊

Aww thank you so much 😊

Thank you for even giving my book a read, and I shall start updating regularly since my exams are over 😊thank you again.

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Hahaha I'll check it out now Thank youuu very much, I'll come up with the names for the chapters instead. :)