The_Mad_Titan
Fantasy lover and mythology nut. I read any genre though.
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A lovely read for anyone interested in the system genre. Although there are a few grammatical blunders, the author makes up for them by keeping us on our toes with each chapter, providing interesting dialogues and a vivid look at the kind of world the story is based in. Keep up the good work author!
Silly me. I completely forgot to include a description of the mc. Thank you for the review as well as pointing this out.
I absolutely loved this. Right from the start, the story draws you in right away. A captivating story coupled with good writing. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work author. This is lovely so far.
Thank you! I'll certainly try and make more lenghty chapters!
I don't even know where to start. Reading this gave me a feeling I haven't felt in quite a while, that feeling of excitement and expectation as you go from chapter to chapter, wondering what's coming next. Intriguing story with lovely writing to keep you hooked as you read through. Keep up the good work!
thank you so much!! I'll do my best to improve on the dialogues.
Although it's still early on, I enjoyed reading the first two chapters and sincerely cannot wait for more. There were a few slight grammatical errors, but you compensated the mistakes with your amazing writing style. It had such a great flow, hooking me in within minutes of reading. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see more.
I'm hooked. This book had a nice mysterious start that got me trapped immediately. The author has quite the free-flowing and simplistic writing style that makes the story really easy to follow. The only problem i have is with a few grammatical errors and punctuation, but ignoring that, I'm quite intrigued by the main character and her 'goal.' Keep it up author. You have a new fan.
When I saw it was Realistic Fiction, I was intrigued because I usually avoid books like this. This book has good dialogues addressing problems that could be relatable. The writer has a nice and "easy to understand" style of writing. The play format is also very convenient. All in all, this is a good book and I would recommend it to whoever is interested in diving into Realistic Fiction. Nice job from the Author.