Not the author shamelessly reviewing their own work!?!11! 😱 Ok but in all seriousness I would rate myself like this. I don't have many chapters but I would say what I do have written is pretty interesting, do give it a chance, or don't, I'm not your boss.

I guess you could say you shouldn't take Ao... LIGHTLY! get it? ... I'll guide myself out-

Not me forgetting to comment on my own work-

the writing is divine I tell you, DIVINE

Afua really be sad an shee

And now we wait

I'm enjoying the story so far. It feels somewhat creative and overall entertaining so far. That being said I highly recommend you get a proof reader or an editor. I would also recommend you hold important snippets of details you've added in the past. What kinda annoys me are the grammatical errors but nothing a little bit of editing can change.

it's been great while it lasted

this is getting pretty good

nice

this is getting pretty good

I like this one :)

ooooh

hmmmm

interesting

uhuh

thanks for the chapter

thx for the chapter

thanks for the chapter