I think an autistic squid could write better....

my brotha please for the love of god upload more often 😭😭 this is too good

clearly not😂

you should look into the song moon on the water

brother plzzzz fix the English, its literally unbearable

Great chapter, the drama is great and the perspective shift to the humour was spot on

it has potential, takes clichés and works them into something a little more unique. Has some very good groundwork

i just want MC to date Hayley, they are so gosh darn cute together

plzzz no harem

dude for the love of all that's holy break it into paragraphs...

one hell of a concept fam, keep jt up at this fic gonna be huge

did you abandon the other story?

am I the only one he sees that these chapters literally progress nothing? half this chapter was literally just copy paste of his pokemons status....

how the fuxk is this the first chapter

if there's anyone he needs to hurt it's that traitor Ishin

+1

the hidden mist jutsu as an ace in the hole is a beauty

much better my man

if this is a reality where he stops picking up girls like pokemon then I'm all in

I swear to god the quality of of story dropped when the harem came. I hoped to god he would just settle with Mirko so that the actual plot could take focus. But now the Harem is the only plot...