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it was his own internal monologue speaking on his personal excitement. It is still possible what you say is true and I'll be more than happy to be wrong if it is, but considering earlier issues in the story around this particular kind of error I'll be equally remiss in assuming so. English as a second language or simply doing a straight translation from one language to another will always leave mistakes on the page. It's to be expected, but this book in particular was painful to read for hundreds of chapters. Many readers complained, many readers left, and others used it as an excuse to denigrate the story and author. Which really sucked. It's a good story. A really good cultivation novel, which comes with its own trappings as all genres do. I am ecstatic at its ever growing trend to less errors and more people just experiencing it.
a few things though. he is currently mid earth sovereign not mid sky. The spelling and/or word errors are a lot less and not really distracting like earlier in the book. I might not have even really noticed and let my mind just matrix past it. The story is very good, the only issues stem from the genre of cultivation and not anything else. I'm happy that i stuck it out with this one and am curious and excited where it goes from here. Good job and thank you for the story
Do it again. And for the first time saying it in stead of just wanting, Mass release please. it can be all side stories of the other characters leading to this point. You can play with idea you didn't or won't get to in the main story.
don't forget momentum using his pivots with multiple points of different mass adds...well not really varibables in the sense of changing the equations much but in the sense of the same equation being done repeatedly nonconsecutively
I like detail and explanations. I'm partial to long lore heavy or systemic breakdowns of a scenario, but the last few chapters have done this in the absence of pacing. if the fight is really about to end then this is a little disappointing. if it isn't and we get more interaction and story it's more than redeemed. we can then see, without exposition, how and why things happen during the fight and following exchanges. Still love this book and don't get the level of hate these chapters are getting, but understand the underlying reason.
Agreed. considering the lack of shadow spawn even thousands of years ago(second nightmare time period) it may have been one of the first to fall. But I don't think that a single area encompassed by a giant corpse, no matter how massive, would be the shadow gods world. The dream world is largely in explored. Hell I think Sunny will come across it at some point of the story, but not now.
the shadow gods domain was a separate world we're all the dead went. the fragments came when someone(can't remember who) broke free of this and back into the living world. the prices of the domain that broke away when they busted out are what sunny and the saint from the second nightmare are using.