Aleksorks
A failed product caused by the pains of life. Whoever reads this, should take their own path and allways listen to those closest to you and not those appearing to be. Its been a nice time, goodbye! <3
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at this point im embarresed to even upload on this account tbh, iv let down a lot of people who pushed my forward and gave me encouraging comments but i just cant do this atm. im trying to make a Novel as of right now so i can pay my bills but yeah thats mostly the reason. Thanks so so so much for reading the fanfiction that i wrote, it truly warms my heart <3 until i decide to stop being a coward then cya
more effective in real combat? is this a joke or something? narutos and hinatas styles are propably much more focused on real combat than any martial art that our world has created and they have been tested on wars with other people capable of superhuman feats... what u said here just makes zero sense but sure go ahead.
Or it could just be a feline monster like a tiger? what then? its worse than the direwolf by a landslide.
OOOOOOOOUUUHHHHHHH ITS EEEERREEEEENN YEEEAAAGGGGGGEEEERRRRRR.
I find it so wierd that people want to have water at their bedside? like bro just get out of bed and go get it.
How much do i got?
sasuke in boruto anyone? LOL
LETS GOOO MA MAN GETTING THAT MC STATUS!!!!
I am entitled to my own opinion but i also think that readers should know what theyr getting into and so ill give my prespective of it. If you like edgy, omg i hate this for absolutley no reason and so im gonna kill everyone on my way suddenly even though i have never killed in my past life, then this story is for you. If you dont like someone getting summoned to the world of naruto which he hates for no reason at all and just beacuse of that wants to kill everyone and cause mass genocide just to get out then this isnt for you. I didnt lie a single time while writting this review. This is an objective standpoint and i even gave you an average rating not high and not low. Peace~
The concept for the story is interesting but sadly the author doesnt have the ability to carry it out and express it through writing, also he/she doesnt seem to care about the novel as much as i have seen people correcting his grammar mistakes and telling him/her how to fix it but he/she just doesn't seem to care.overall the writing quality is bad.The more you read through it, the more boring the story becomes so the story development is also bad.Characters are basiclly one dimensional and quite honestly feel like they just exist for the sole purpose of giving the mc some *swag* or make him look *cool*.updating stability seemed average.As we all know the world is a copy of fairy tail but he does add some little things so ill consider it average.With all that considered i give this a 2.4 rating out of 5.recommandation: dont waste your time.
young man really?? he's 13 ffs
Does the grammar improve later? I hope so.
would of been a cool vampire
left?? nah the right is much more holy