Ravven2769

I feel kinda bad but at the same time, was she meant to wait 2 years for someone she didn’t even know for two weeks? They weren’t even technically together and all they did was kiss like once. Her kissing him after he returned after she got aethered was actually weirder imo

There wasnt even an explanation as to the world she was now in, her age. the surprise of being Daphne now. It was instant. The MC has no character at all and whoever wrote this should be banned from writing ever again

Poorly written MTL with absolutely nothing going for it. 'Courting Death.' Chapters are crazy short and one conversation dragged out over the first like 7 chapters.

This makes no sense No one would let their daughters stay at Hogwarts then if they got sorted there It also makes arranged and political marriages impossible Half assed ‘slytherins are evil’ plot

As if you wouldnt call him Wade

And presumably the Japanese at Mahoutokoro

A greatsword only weighs like 2-3 kg, so it's really not that heavy

He didnt learn it because Snape didnt teach him anything. Shouting 'Clear your mind,' while ripping his mind apart and humiliating him (from someone he doesnt trust and despises, no less) is not teaching

Well that's obviously not true. Hermione has a vinewood and dragon heartstring wand and she doesnt seem to stop showing off and is incapable of shutting her mouth