Gaby_Gray_9135

There is a lot of repetition of information that seems to just take up space and word count. The character names and genders also change often making it a bit difficult to follow. Once you get to ch 347 a ton of information is missing on how the ML got to where he is and previous information has now changed out of now where. Then the story starts to jump around a lot and things get very confusing. I sadly stopped reading at this point. It was manageable to get through the inconsistency to start but it became too messy to continue reading.

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