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So Bloodraven isnt evil in this one? usually a common cliche
18 now?
Nedvěd... such an underrated player! Top top skill
I appreciate the backstory and good dialogue. Keep it up.
seemed like a lost kid lol, not a ruthless criminal
I recently watched the original series and my god was it a drag... hopefully this fanfic will have a faster pace since Micheal won't make all the mistakes that the original does. Some points so far: 1. Why does Micheal need to tattoo his whole body with information if he already got eidetic memory? this will only give the detective a way to track Micheal down after the escape... 2. Why does he befriend Cooper when he got no use? The only use for the old man is his money, which Micheal should already know where it is buried... 3. Potential skills for action scenes would be interesting. Brawn and not only smarts... Otherwise it's a decent story. Thanks
he should already know where the money is...
Does he really need the plane from Abruzzi? that plan went to hell real fast in the series... besides, he's a notorious mafia boss
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