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_Carolina_writes_

_Carolina_writes_

Lv4

I am just an escaper!

2019-09-21 UnidoPakistan
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    Respondeu a Rup_Kunwar_Rathore

    Thank you so much dear. Your comment means a lot to me💕.

    Ch 49 Chapter 49: I Am Here For You
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Louise_Wright_2100

    Thank you for giving my book a chance!!💓

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: A Familiar Face
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a BabyTee

    Thank you so much!Your comment made my day🥰

    Ch 68 Chapter 68: Precise Method To Check Temperature
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a BabyTee

    Thank you so much 🥰

    Ch 64 Chapter 64: Can You Drive?
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Johnny_Pesa

    Hi!Sorry for that inconvenience. You might have tolerate this till chp I think 55. After that there is no a single repeated paragraph. So I hope you enjoy reading this book till the end.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: Tasting Owns Medicine!
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    I have read your book. The plot of your story is good. But there are more thing you need to know and work on your story to make it much better so that you can get contract.1. Synopsis: should summarize your story but it should be mysterious so that reader would be curious to read your book. 2. Grammatical mistake and dialogues improvement.Other than that your story plot is good if you correct these things you might get contract.

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    WE CAN'T BE YOUR BROTHER ANYMORE
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Phyllisna

    Thank you 💓

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: A Familiar Face
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Author_Promise

    I didn't wanted to be harsh😊 I was just telling you your mistakes. I just wanted to help you. I hope you will improve your book and hope you get a contract from webnovel too

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    Doomed without you
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    1. First of all there isn't a proper cover. You haven't even wrote synopsis which means it doesn't gave any idea about your book.2. There are no inverted coma around the dialogues. No proper paragraph. Not even any explanation of the dialogue who is saying and what he/she was doing when saying those dialogues.3. The starting wasn't understandable. And also the chapter words count should be at 1000 to 1500 words.4. There is not even a proper background.

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    Doomed without you
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Linda_Ngan

    Really sorry for that mistake. But that mistake is done I can't change even if I want to do that. From 55 chp there is no repeating endings. And there will be no repeating endings in the upcoming chp till it is completed.

    Ch 49 Chapter 49: I Am Here For You
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Betty_Macias

    Don't worry Fl is strong and will never let anyone bully her. You can read further chp to know what happened there.

    Ch 60 Chapter 60: Unexpected Appearance
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a LoveToReadNovels

    Really sorry for inconvenience. There is a mistake in chp 45, 46 and 47 I think. Both are connected because of repeating scene. At that time it wasn't removing nor deleting. So I told in the author note that their is a mistake in those chapter. And ending repeating in the next chapter was my mistake that I thought it would be easier for the reader if that person has skipped pervious chp so he/she will get a review what happened in the previous chp that's why I repeated ending in the next following chp. I stopped doing that I think from 55 or 56 I don't remember the exact one. To sum up all these, new chp doesn't have these repeating ending so you can read without getting bothered from repeating endings. Really sorry for those mistakes. I hope you would be enjoying the book!!Thanks for giving a chance to my book!!Have a nice day!

    Este número foi suprimido.
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a BabyTee

    I am happy that you guys are enjoying the book. From now on I will update daily. So you guys can read!!

    Ch 55 Chapter 55: Feeling Butterflies In Stomach
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Very well written. Good luck to you author!!

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    Transmigrated to be the alpha's witch
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    It was good. The starting, synopsis, background was well developed.

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    THE DARK QUEEN
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Ronny_Frank

    I am so happy you liked the story. Stay tuned more interesting scene are coming on the way 🤭!!

    Ch 46 Chapter 46: Stalker
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Ronny_Frank

    Don't worry dear it will not be too long nor too short. The mass release will start from 23 june. Stay tuned for that!!🤗

    Ch 49 Chapter 49: I Am Here For You
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    Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a BabyTee

    Thank you so much 🥰 for this precious comment. I will resume with a mass release on 23 june. But for now you can enjoy these chapters 💖

    Ch 54 Chapter 54: Intimidating
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    Respondeu a Nozel_Michaelis

    Thank you so much 🥰

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    Devil And His Princess
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  • _Carolina_writes_
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    I don't usually read Ml stories but your is really well written. The description and background, the each and everything was explained with detail. Good Luck to you !!

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    Hydrax Legacy
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