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Doomed without you

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What is Doomed without you

Leia o romance Doomed without you escrito pelo autor Author_Promise publicado no WebNovel. She was just a girl who yearned for love and her family, but fate had it's own plans for her...

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She was just a girl who yearned for love and her family, but fate had it's own plans for her

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Excerpt The trees roars responding to the nature after a heavy rainfall. sounds of leaves crashing with each other were heard accompany by a footsteps running and panting. "Please let me go,i swear i didn't do anything." She pleaded with tears rolling down her face, her hair in a tangled mess and her voice cracked from wandering around in the forest as she was held captive. Looking at the able-bodied men surrounding her, chills run down her spine as one of the men leaned closer to her face and pull her hair. Dragging her along with him. "I am not moved by your tears... don't think you will fool me with those." He gave out a menacing laughter throwing her on the ground causing her to sustain more injuries on her face. She was already shivering, and looking at the huddle men none of them seems to help rather they laughed along, taking turns to torture her. They either dragged her on the hair or they kick her on any part of her body and she wince on the floor. Her heart bleed in pain and uncontrollably tears streaming freely down her cheeks. There is nothing she can do, even if there will be a miracle maybe she will be dead before it happens. She clutch on her clothes with her knees folded up in fear and panic, she wanted to run away but she knows her strength and capabilities are not a match to the men. She low her head, muttering inaudibly to her creator for him to touch their minds so that they can pity and release her. But as she looked up, it seems her prayers were futile as one of the men advance towards her wearing only his pants. "No! No! No." Her heart skip a beat as she closed her eyes. "God please i rather die than let them have me." "Come over here you bitch" The man yelled out to her and heavy laughter echoed in the forest. The men where having a fun evening at the expensive of her comfort. She trembled, pushing backward as much as her strength can carry her. "It seems the bitch is acting stubborn." One of the men with a hulky muscles said and the men again give out a hullabaloo laughter. She screamed as they dragged her along, the men walking around her like they found some evening meat. "Let me go please, let me go please." She plead, kicking with evey ounce of strength in her but it seems she was beating the air as they dropped her on the floor, held her two hands backward and part her legs. "NOooooooooooooooooooo." She screamed. Synopsis I was in my own dark, until you shine me your light. A young students nurse lost her way on the last day of completing her health campaign in a rural area. She wandered around in a mysterious wood where she was held captives by some quisling huddles, who find nothing but joy in torturing her. Was she able to escape from such traumatic experience. Follow me as i walk you down bit by bit, unfolding this paranormal story.

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Her father died when she was a year old and her mother remarried a second time. She had a half brother, a year younger. She was the heir to the company her father left for her and she was to inherit when she turn twenty and finish studying. She was quite popular with the media because of her looks and talent in music since the young age. She even has few copyrights under her name in the industry. Tho she was popular, she was closed off and had only few trusted friends. Her neighbour, a friend in school and another neighbour turn lover in her father's old town Daegu. Her relationship with her family wasn't great but it was okay. Her mother don't like her much because of how she likes arts over business, her step father didn't even look at her way and her half brother was the apple of everyone's eye in their household. Life was good, she had a brother like figure in her life, a close friend and the one who loves and support her. Then it wasn't good. She saw it coming but what she thought would happen had been much better then what actually happened. She was abducted right from her room, put into a wooden box with vegetables and transported in a ship into a different country and got auctioned off at an underground club. Luck was not on her side for so long she lost hope but then it did And she started from there NOTE: slow update ^_^ p.s- seriously, I don't know how to update the story cover so someone come and kill me

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I love this kind of stories it's my type I'm so excited to read more

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1. First of all there isn't a proper cover. You haven't even wrote synopsis which means it doesn't gave any idea about your book.2. There are no inverted coma around the dialogues. No proper paragraph. Not even any explanation of the dialogue who is saying and what he/she was doing when saying those dialogues.3. The starting wasn't understandable. And also the chapter words count should be at 1000 to 1500 words.4. There is not even a proper background.

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First of all the story is interesting though I occasionally read romance genere. But this book is really awesome. But I wanna suggest some things to writer. Cover and Syonpsis try to add a splendid cover and a synopsis those two would definitely benefit you. Other thing is there were no comma or indications between dialogues it seem like it goes on with the narration or might get mistaken with someone else's dialogue so make sure to use comma between dialogues so it will look more organised and won't get mixed with narration. Apart from this the writing and creation is enjoyable really good one keep writing Author.

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