Kiwidraken
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Dam, again? This is getting a little mebarassing :|
Yup, you’re observant and right about that 👍🏻
Good point. Talia is just built different after hard physical labor, brawling with the other people in town, and Gerhart and Ritzy. But the knights are mobs, so I didn't put that much thought into them while Talia is a main character. Of course she's better. That's not plot armor. That's being a character worthy of being a central part in the story.
I get what you're coming from and you make a strong point, so I agree with you. But I also think it might work the other way as well now that I'm more actively trying to up the pace. I'll cram things together to write shorter chapters, which will increase the pace, or at least keep it relevant. But I have a feeling that a combination will be best. I'll write long chapters when necessary and short chapters when that works. Best of both worlds :)
Thank you for the feedback. It means a lot that you're willing to write so much for me :P EC and TM are kind of also my favorites, but EC is what it is and I've put a lot of time into making TM what it is right now, so I don't think I can do it consistently and frequently without it losing quality. And for SUN, I think I've made Ritzy's goals pretty clear. He wants to become the greatest necromancer by surpassing his inspiration, The Dark One, which no one knows much about, really. He also wants to figure out what's wrong with his magic, even if it takes beating up a god to do so. I'm pretty sure he had a conversation with Gerhart about that. And I have an ending with that explanation in mind. I would say that the plot is currently being built to lay a foundation for Ritzy's journey, but it might be a little plotless at the moment. Not for long tho >:)