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Kaul_Deapsea1mthComentouOverpowered from the get go, strange but I'll roll with it. I dislike Hinata's characterization, of course you can say it is faithful to the original, but I disliked it in the original too. I am curious of the events of the rest of the book, but I wasn't feeling this chapter.
Ch 1 Nindō 0001: Prologue- Kaul_Deapsea1mthPostado
- Kaul_Deapsea2mthRespondeu a IdkykCh 2 Eight Inner Gates of Enlightenment
- Kaul_Deapsea2mthRespondeu a DaoistcaqwL5
Thanks, I had been feeling like I was writing on a dessert island or something. Your comment are super encouraging
Este número foi suprimido. - Kaul_Deapsea2mthRespondeu a DaoistcaqwL5
Yes, while I do think he deserves to be a Hokage I want Naruto to be given the title when he most deserved it. Which is after the war.
Este número foi suprimido. - Kaul_Deapsea9mthRespondeu a Daoist4TP1jP
I think it's the vestibule. It's clear that everyone around him knew the strategy and with him not having the will to do anything the vestibule took over. Thats what I think at least.
"...ssssuper happy to help out. You can rely on me anytime!" - Kaul_Deapsea9mthComentou
I never thought I would get the most complete representation of a panic attack from Antony of all ants.
Too hesitant to make a move, I do the only thing I can think of: I tuck my legs under my body, bury my head in the rock and accept my fate. If I can't decide what I should do, then I shall do nothing! Clearly, this is the best course of action! - Kaul_Deapsea10mthPostado
I truly can't comprehend how such a wonderful book could be so good but fall off in such a way turning into a Uroboros of its own and reusing characters. Disobeying it's own laws and assassinating it's own setups. I am left in awe of how a person can demolish such wonderful work. Not to mention the insecurity the author feels to tell us time and again through the MC that the story belongs to him. And also if you want guys to be part of the harem there were way better characters we got to know early that would have been awesome.
- Kaul_Deapsea1yrComentou
This is too direct for politics say something like "Our troops have family in the north and it is the duty of the Crown to defend all its citizens. We cannot shrink back just because of the eagerness of the mad Queen."
"As for splitting her attention, it would mean violating our truce. If we abandon our people just because we lose the city, the morale of the troops will plummet. Thrud always defended our borders, even when Belius was in our hand and we can't be outdone. - Kaul_Deapsea1yrComentou
Man there is a lot of 'On top of that' s.
On top of that, Thrud had emptied all the prisons of the territories she had conquered, turning the Kingdom's worst criminals into immortal soldiers for her army. They knew little about magic, but some of them were skilled warriors and ruthless killers. - Kaul_Deapsea1yrRespondeu a Muddus
Yeah but those 9 months though.
"I was telling Rethia that I envy creatures like her who can choose between laying eggs and pregnancy." Rena said with a sigh. "After giving birth to the triplets, just the idea of repeating the experience sends a cold shiver down my spine." - Kaul_Deapsea2yrRespondeu a Daoist787609
Okay so are you telling me that emotions can be attachments and that Solus' dad's love was not enough or something.
"Yes." Theseus nodded. "I was- I mean, Paquut was an artist. Even after becoming an Eldritch, he never stopped practicing. Our deadly Abomination Touch doesn't bother a painter like it does other artists. - Kaul_Deapsea2yrRespondeu a Daoist787609
You do know that one of the very few ways those poor people have to getting out of poverty is the military and killing and even just the mental trauma may result in a family loosing a breadwinner.
Her left middle finger touched the thumb, ready for another snap. The desk sergeant knew that it wasn't an empty threat because her whole body could feel the mana flowing from the Abomination into her and then into an area filled with thousands of civilians. - Kaul_Deapsea2yrComentou
Wow I love this Flip Flopping it so indicative of an 'inner struggle' .
'I stand corrected. Bytra and the Council are not the same. She's offered me the Absolution twice already and it was my choice to refuse it. She's here to fight for me, risking her life to get back the Mouth and try to fix our relationship. - Kaul_Deapsea2yrComentou
FRICKING idiots that is a Guardian for Christ's sake.
"It would be of great help to the cause if you joined our efforts, Ileza. You are the Guardian of Life and avoiding the conflict between Councils would save countless lives." - Kaul_Deapsea2yrComentou
Why always War. Like just tell them the owner of the mouth ran away and hide them.
"Also, where you guys only see a disaster, I see an opportunity. If we get rid of the intruders, we'll kill several birds with one stone. Their death will weaken the Garlen Council, the Organization, and we'll finally get justice for the countless lives that those Eldritches took through the centuries. - Kaul_Deapsea2yrComentou
How did they infer that they would die. Isn't being forced to give up the Mouth a bit closer.
"The past is beyond our reach and if we don't focus on the present, we'll have no future because we'll be all dead." - Kaul_Deapsea2yrComentou
Does Mogar have a fricking news channel or something.
"All three of them came to be because of Tyris, Leegaain, and Salaark. While your offspring slaughtered innocents, theirs achieved great things!" - Kaul_Deapsea2yrComentou
I guess she's the passive type.
"They'll never reach Garlen's prowess." Ileza, Guardian of Life and Mother of all the Bastets said. "The War of the Griffons has weakened their Council, but once it ends, they'll come out stronger than ever. - Kaul_Deapsea2yrComentou
What a chaotic country it will be.
"The number of Awakened in Jiera has boomed and soon they'll become as strong as Garlen. I heard That Zagran the Garuda is actively helping them and wants to follow in Salaark's footsteps to give her own Kingdom a go."