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Too many Perfect Character with Perfect Body in Korean LN, like formula : For Men must have 6666 rule (6 pack abs, 6 figure salary, 6 feet tall, 6 inch D), and for Women they must have 8 Hourglass body, and brain rot. Until i think its not Korean People actually in reality. With that formula, its really not suprising author always make depressing ending, because author want make reader attach to beautiful/handsome died character or sympaty to MC suffering. But for me, its already Mainstream. because i already know, author always Break The Death Rule : Easy Resurrection, Rebirth, Regress, Loop, or have any magic to make died character alive again, to reach happy ending or sacrifice MC to make happy ending for other Character.
Nice Story. Keep it on Library. I think MC has a potential to be Good Neutral Character. I just hope MC not so Over Power and MC can death if he make mistake in battle. Background story for MC with another Character is good, they (MC and His Friend) still think and act like toddler, its a good Point for me. Really i just hope MC is not so OP because it will ruin MC friendship and MC background. at least i hope MC friend can keep up with MC in term Battle Power.
Thanks. i hope you not discourage to write again because this review. I already read many Novel Extra fanfic. And i know many of Novel Extra fanfic is drop, because author put too many Buff to their MC, and have Flawless Personality, so story arc in Canon Novel Extra become short because MC can easy solve Canon Novel Extra Conflict. And they don't know how to put Good Filler Chapter outside from Novel Extra Storyline. That why Perfect MC + Flawless MC always boring and not attract anything (except, you can write Canon Female Lead with interesting Personality, and have good compability with your MC)
I just want write review. This fanfic Will have Boring Phase. Your MC already Invincible (Immortality from Ajin), has knowledge about future plot, and good looking. If you put Calm Protagonist Template to your MC, this MC already Perfect Human. He don't need Character Development except training, because he already has Perfect Personality. Its Will boring story for me. Atleast you must put some weakness to MC, so he will know learning from mistake or something.
You must know many Korea LN is has : Good Start > Repeating Mid Arc > Bad Ending Conclusion.
CorrupTobi
Hahaha... It's true. Very common nowdays Fanfic and Light Novel. For convenience make storyline and plot armor
You do a good job. Really, this is perfect story for me. Even you use Anime Character as template, i know its for reader can imagine how your Character expression they personality, its completely different from any Fanfic Story. Each Character have unique personality, and contrast each other. And what i love about this story, all Main Character or Side Character is not perfect, they complement each other. Even Story Development progress with good Narative each Chapter. I don't know how to explain it anymore. For me this really Good Story and Good Character. I can't have opinion for Writing Quality/Update/World Background, its not my speciality.