Hit1903
Escrita
de leitura
2620
Ler livros
then why didn't he just inform Atticus? At least this way he would have been prepared
so in a first meeting he decided to lecture a lord in foreign land. what a moron
They could have avoided killing all if they had come off as people who ran into bandits. They could have bought a horse and gone their merry way.
The other villagers didn't break any promises
it was a cringefest
Dumb mc
he is taking too long in killing 100 zombies. with his advantages it would be a matter of a few hours not week
why not make everyone contribute to buy something
The character is so bad that his mute sister feels more like the protagonist of the story.
so why is he going in a dungeon with them. he could have gone with a modest group. and how can he even ensure he wouldn't be cheated out of his pay
previous one was better
Didn't Dumbledore used legil to read aurora mind before Xavier job interview
i know this wasn't your fault but it doesn't make a man cool when he spends money Willy nilly. why is he letting the goblins do as they want?
have you dropped this
the fact that the guy was alright letting his wife travel was a big blunder.
Are they children or adult. they don't speak like children. They don't act like children
How did he have enough mana for a heart core when he only had enough for 1
shouldn't he go to the tree. they should have all left the tree for the airplane by now
Hey man, your chapters are getting shorter and shorter. Still, a good story. Keep it up
overall very good. still, let's see as it is still in its initial phase