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Yeah i agree, It has got to the point that it has killed my intrest in a story when it is used
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Will be completly honest, did not like this as the first chapter of the novel. I always think that showing the future on the first chapter like this always takes out the experience since you are basically spoiling your own novel, and another reason is that most probably the novel will be dropped way before reaching that point and hence it feels like a teaser to a movie which will never drop. Complely reductant in my point of view
Pokemon champion and master should be swapped
Good choice
I don't like the reviving thing, would have been better to just have giyu and be done with it, reviving other demon slayer seems pointless to me
I don't know why but always hated the party function. Would have prefered if you had taken this away rather than gamers body and mind.
Honeslty if there is one world where i don't mind harem, it is dxd.
Can you explain what this is refrencing?
Bro there is not much diference in strenght between a special jonin and a chunin, your list is plain wrong.
Not being able to get stats with training is still too much of a loss, the gamer power itself is overpowered, if you don't want him to be op, could have just chosen something else.
Whats with fanfic authors and their fetish with writing prolouge such as this when it has no impact whatsoever on the character. A significant other cheating can cause serious trust issue to the person being cheated on but i know there won't be such a thing just from experience of reading fanfics. Sorry for the rant but this just seriously killed my desire to read this fic.
I think its a valid criticism in a world like naruto were there are a lots of characters which can be used. And i though it was more of an issue that most of his interaction was with the ocs and not even the original cast of the show which made no sense to me. Again i would have been fine with oc if this was a fanfic of a show with a lot less charcters shown like hunterxhunter or was in the warring state, but the fic is in the time period of naruto hence i didn't like the inclusion of ocs.
Bro what
What are you waffling about bro💀