Dude idk how u doing it but u actually wrote Gwen better than most writers at marvel today could write her.

Solid fic no complaints

Good Story but dropped

Good chapter man, when are we going to get Ulfs POV again?

Like the chapter, though Healenas outburst seems out of character for her. Though I hope they eventually resolve their issue

Is it that bad?

Is this story not getting updated anymore?

I’m pretty sure I changed it, I honestly don’t know why it keeps reverting to the old version. Although I suspect it’s to do with me writing on different devices and the chapters then reverting back to the original form as I didn’t change it on both. So sorry about that

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It’s fixed

Yes

No one gets a shonen boost around these parts

Some will like Forbidden Balor but things like Telos Karma and Invotion Clear can definitely not as they are too OP

Yes, no Asia

This is a fanfic do I need to say anymore

Nothing, he’s just gonna have Siegfrieds Twice Critical Critical instead

No pro blem

No

Wrong one bro

Already on it, I’ve been slowly try to ironing out any inconsistencies and have been going through the chapter and editing any mistakes. I think Ive fixed most of the wrong things so you shouldn’t notice any things like Senjutsu being mentioned anymore. Im still fixing things like grammer and spelling though which should all be done before the next chapter.