every fcuking reborn mc who knows Naruto knows kage bushin is the op power how come he didn't train in it from young age..

sorry ch 25

idea is very good..but all I see MC do is stand and watch and get stronger no action even when there it is it is veerereyy poor...again I have only read about 15 ch but very poor execution of action especially in Naruto world were s rank fight is happening and mc is only monologing in his mind instead of action

what the duck is he doing watching battle he culture kill other ninjas easily

I swear I have read this book somewhere else with other title ..is it a copy ..

lottery..casino can help him become rich with simulation

Maan don't update for 7 days and then do it all together .wait and 1 ch reading is painful

5 min silence for those who read till now and now are hanging on cliffhanger

how did new Noah know then that he had adhd

criticism is so that you improve not to just laugh it up... people continue to read and comment because they feel there is scope for the idea to turn into a very good novel...but in the end it's up to author to truly get to the height

am I the only one who found the idea of golems talking dumb...I mean they can get battle intelligence n all but talking like a person means he need to be alive that means that is not a golem.. couldn't continue reading more than that idea was cool but execution left me wanting

your whole book till now is filled with useless info nothing attractive about it..no mention of his progress how much strong he is nothing ...if I wasn't desperate to find new novel I would have dropped it..

you clearly have no idea how Harry Potter World works....time Turner is not used like how you are using randomly again and again..like he went back to morning then again in that morning he went back in ministry .all too rushed to character changed too suddenly..

very boring..read 15 chapter but this is plain boring...

different novels different genres some that are on top of my mind God of fishing super gene complete martial arts attribute loosing money to be tycoon ( although after some time I lost interest there was no romance till 700) I could suggest more if you like..you can tell me a few names too I feel I have read almost all the available ones that I feel are good.

have you read some good fanfic .there are so many ways you can improve mc without him being op...it's like after mc met Sirius he became even more average everything he did was before Hogwarts ..he knows voldi is coming but not preparing he is not at all serious about being strong and you are also more focused on avg mc..well I loved your writing before train ..he was smart wandless magic and all but now it's vomit

went from great to worst in a chapter...the moment he met Sirius black James ppotter ent from smart to the one we read in actual book...prank and quidditch that's all his life is about..I don't say stop this..but he stopped training stopped studying .he was supposed col and smart and went to become dumb and annoying .. literally in one ch you write James would rather spend time wasting with Sirius than in Library .I was happy to find a good fanfic but you ruined it the moment he met Sirius ..fcuk you author and a lot of slangs I said to you in my mind..

if possible I would rate this in negative for story...good plotline but ruined by idiot author...after bulbasore arc I can't handle this shit anymore ..

aarcher I'll never have enough time to nock arrow while fighting wolf..atleast a bigginer ..do you even know how fast a wolf will be when attacking .even when a dog attacks do you seriously think you will have enough time to play bow and arrow..

simp mc for Hermione ....giving out his secrets like candies ....author only simps...