This looks like a really good start to a novel, and i'm actually very excited to see where this ends up. Might be seeing a future top 25 in the site, but it all stems from you writing more quality like this frequently. good luck!

shameless writer review. hope you enjoy, if you do just use your power stones and support by writing a nice chapter comment giving me criticism or just say something nice, it helps alot. <3 rydertheking

Great story, writing quality is excellent and helps me as a reader to imagine the scenarios that you've written. The plot itself is pretty good, although word count quite short but that doesn't matter when you write enough to keep the story interesting. Keep going writer, i want to see where this story ends up!

Great plot, coherent structure, everything flows well and it just makes reading so much more enjoyable. The story itself is extremely interesting, and i hope you continue to completion because i'm excited to see where this novel will end up in the future!

edited

oh that, not for this story for the time being, maybe if it feels natural to the plot but it probably won't.

no...? i mean it's a male protagonist novel my fren

Sorry for taking a week off. Back to normal schedule! Another chapter releasing tomorrow!

Edited the chapter and changed the route slightly. I usually never do this mid-plot but it was a significant change that was going to change how the novel was moving forward. But I want to write a rebirth story, so i shall write a rebirth story. The plot I wanted to do will still happen, but with different route instead of the one i planned.

gave it a thought, and you are right. changing the "rebirth" aspect this drastically can probably ruin the thing most people love about rebirth stories. going to edit it now and include the plot i wanted to do without doing that. <3

edited, thanks for letting me know!

thats the plan!

I'm back! Semester ended meaning I am done for the year! Daily uploads from here on! Thanks for the support as i was gone, and i hope to gain more support from you in the future!

i will soon! university is finishing up soon and from there on i can fully invest my entire time in this webnovel! thank you for supporting me!

sorry for not uploading more chapters, final assignments for university is due and its a lot of work i got to do. will be releasing something tomorrow.

fixed. as a writer, its hard to remember what whimsical information you put in every chapter you write. my bad!

thank you!

dude, thank you for gifting. you seriously made my day 2 days ago and now today!

Not into romance novel, but reading this has been extremely pleasant. I like the world buildings, the characters you have created and also how frequent you upload chapters. I really hope you continue writing because i am excited to see where this story goes!

tyfp <3