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Author! I know it's early, but do you see yourself working on another work for a fanfiction or is it still too early?
People complain about this story saying that the protagonist is very weak, but what I like most about the story is realizing how he becomes stronger and the price of this, so there is always a feeling can he lose
5 million yen is about 30 thousand dollars
800 thousand yen is about 5 thousand dollars
So far the story is super engaging, so full marks, I would like to ask what works you intend to bring to this universe, what do you think of a character inheriting powers from Jujutsu kaisen or maybe someone inheriting Guts from Berserk? Great job!
The story is still in its early stages for a complete critique, but I have read some of your other works and I can say that this one has potential. You don't need a groundbreaking idea to continue, just keep the writing mature and focus on developing your characters. I understand that the first chapters rush things, because we want to see the encounters, but it would be more impactful if you developed the setting and environment before that.
Come on author, be nice to us, how about a Power Stones goal for you to post new chapters faster?