WorthlessMonkey

No

I must commend you for your choice of Profile picture for your story. It was a truly wonderful read.

Oh right, yeah. Oh yeah, I just read this line and I just remembered I had wnated to change that. My bad. Thanks

when did I use them?

He has some trauma with him and he doesn't really like Cardin.

What do you mean? Shortening things?

It's more on the line how every last one of his siblings is a Hunter. And besides, Jaune in canon doesn't have a twin brother. And I am not giving him one just for plot. Heck, I mentioned some of his friends are Hunters. They could be guys for all you know. In Ruby's case, he doesn't accept Ruby's help because he wants to be a Hero. Someone who lends a helping hand. someone who is strong. This isn't him being a sexist. This is him being embarrassed at unable to fight for himself.This is him humiliated at how someone two years younger than him wants to help him. wouldn't you feel embarrassed if someone younger than you and therefore more inexperienced managed to solve something you can't? You lived younger and logically, you would've tasted more salt. not literal salt. Like gain more experience. If I changed Ruby to a guy and have him say this line to a Male Ruby, will it still sound like he doesn't want Ruby's help because of her gender. No.

That is good right? He wants to be a Hero and has a certain mindset to it.

she doesn't seem to be the sort that is the most attentive. At least from his perspective.

and what do you think it actually is?