MerlinDragonlord

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Great work so far, I hope you keep at it. The only advice I would give is that don’t get caught up on trying to my Harry or anyone else “balanced”. If you think Harry is becoming too powerful then raise the bar for everyone else, give them ways to strike back at him even when he’s OP, that’s the fun of Magic Systems, weird and esoteric powers and spells. Other than that I think you’re doing a great job, and I can’t wait to see how the story develops.

More Please :)

Thanks for the chapter, and Welcome Back :)

Can't respect STOLEN WORK. If You want to read the Original that also has an 30+ extra Chapters then go to Star Wars: Aiden the Bounty Hunter right here on Webnovel. Good story though

There's Two I would recommend right now Homelander: New Legacy, Self Insert as Homelands with Superman's Powers as well. Then The Boys: Homelander, another self insert as homelander. Both of these are pretty descent, the only bad thing is that they're both Nice Guys to a extent, so you won't be seeing them just killing random people for no reason, but to be fair they aren't Superman Levels of Righteousness. However, if you want a darker one The Boys: Speed of Redemption is a bit more darker, as its a self insert of of A-Train instead. Honestly, just keep an eye out for something you like, the quality of some of these fics fluctuate wildly between authors.

If you want an honest review, I wouldn't recommend this fic, mostly because you have to Pay to read anything past 6 Chapters. The author also said that they weren't posting anymore chapters beyond what's already on. So, honestly, don't bother, it has a ton of potential, just not enough to pay for it, look somewhere else there are plenty of other The Boys stories that are free, and in many cases better.

Why not A Fae's Gambit as a name, just a suggestion though, I'm sure you'll figure it out :)

Thanks for the chapter, currently my fav fanfiction. Just an idea, one you've probably already thought off, but have you thought about using conditions/binding contracts, like Neville's Heavenly Restriction. For example, create a binding contract that allows the MC to use his spirits innate powers like has was born with them, but in return it kills the spirit or something similar.

Yeah in the original light novel it used to be X2, X4, X8, etc, but then they changed it to an additive boost, like if you had a power level of 10 then used a boost it would be 20, then if you used it again it would be 30. So frankly just go off what you thinks make a better story since the cannon is an incoherent mess, especially later on in the series.