Author even though you try to make it interesting it causes boring feel sometimes. You can be dramatic but not too long. Try to make the story line move a bit faster. Every time I open the chapter it just drags and get to know everything after 1 or 2 chapters.

Mass release please!!!

Mass release please!!!!

Why is the chapter too short?

You have improve your grammer author. If you feel like idea is getting struck while thinking grammar. Then, after writing the chapter read the content. You can grasp some mistakes yourself.