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jess_weston3hRespondeu a Psanno kidding, I just don't think this author gets it. the simulations are a new character each time thus, they shouldn't have any knowledge of other characters. why does a four year old who hasn't developed, know how to cultivate genetic energy. earth standards wouldn't even allow him to practice so early even if he was in a major clan. even with how broken luo feng was he still didn't become a warrior until 18 years old.
[Year 9: The first person to die came to the door he wanted to know your secret so he came to your sister knowing that if he can kidnap her then it'll be easy to get. But He got brutaly killed by you in public. You don't want to hide it and wanted to use this as a warning to those who has ill throught about you secrets or family but because of this some people frame you that you are not a human how can a child be so cruel blah blah. For this even Hong and thounder god came to fight you but you defeat them like nothing and also said if you want to go alive then give some treasure 1 treasure each as composate and from them you got Soaring Stutter and Emperor grade fighting plane. You also become number 1 fighter in the world because of you, your family also become top 1 richest family in the world.]- jess_weston3hRespondeu a OTAKU_BOY
......no, he is not even at the age of Earth standards to even start practicing. The age of the MC in the simulation is too young. even heirs in well off families don't train that young (Earth standards, which your simulations are set in). what your saying is MC without high tier talent is better than luo feng.......did you forget how broken luo feng is? setting your MC's system aside, the characters run in the simulation don't have the system, right? the simulations have made no indication of the family background for that character either. it's still earth standards, so I doubt the parents in the simulation were strong enough to pass glorious genes on to that character. he is starting with a normal human body. your body would have to develop naturally till you're at least a teenager around 14 or 15 years old. it's been a while since I read swallowed star, but I'm pretty certain people start training in at least highschool.
[Day 2900: you have finally made water Domain in a life and death moment] - jess_weston15hComentouCh 6 Meeting Muyi and Getting a Backer(2)
- jess_weston20hRespondeu a Tyler_rigby
be thankful it's not that long
Compelled - jess_weston1dComentouBtw to the real fan of my fic. Thank you for being normal. Y'all the real one bro.
- jess_weston1dRespondeu a Daoist_KittyKat(Trap/Fem)
- jess_weston1dComentou
Nagisa.....from Clannad
4. MUST! Have tragic backstory that need our might and powerful mc to bail their pretty asses out from the crisis or certain death. Like our lovable pufferfish. - jess_weston2dRespondeu a ImpishWolf
I would probably act like her son currently does 😂. I'm not overly familiar with familial displays of affection, so getting so much at one time seems a bit overwhelming. I wouldn't be out right against it though. we would have all the family bath times she wanted. keeping the bloodline pure is also important 😏.
[Crystal Deer's Twin Antlers]:: Crystal Deer's antlers. The horns are special crystals called [Flame Crystal] and [Aqua Crystal], which are traded at a very high price. It can be transformed into a magical weapon called [Magic Weapon]. - jess_weston2dComentou
what corrected errors? he is still being called she and more
Sure, here is the text with any remaining errors corrected: - jess_weston4dRespondeu a BurgerNight
I agree
"Congratulations! The level of proficiency for Eighth-Class Solo Nine Swords—Broken Sword Style has reached the intermediate level, therefore, the level of proficiency of sword technique for Ninth-Class Thirteen Autumn Rain Swords automatically increased by 5000." - jess_weston4dComentou
pfft he won't give up. he might even get disowned
"Those rumors were used as a means to piss Sun Zhengpin off so that he can't wait to defeat or even kill me before the public during the competition," Zhou Heng explained, "In the end, Sun Zhengpin will be defeated by me before the eyes of the public. By then, he will be mad and embarrassed at the same time and subsequently, no longer be interested in pursuing Ms. Wang." - jess_weston4dRespondeu a ImNotNarcissistic
does he have our sympathy?
"Only for that?" Zhou Heng was stunned and asked in surprise, "Three thousand taels of silvers only to see her once at the doorstep?" - jess_weston4dRespondeu a Rico_Sebastian
depends on how interested I am or if I'm stressed about something that takes my focus. I've had to reread paragraphs multiple times because I didn't even comprehend actually reading them.
Not long ago at night, Sun Zhengfeng had failed in his attempt to ambush Zhou Heng, because of it, he and his eight generations of ancestors would even be thanked for the effort soon in the future. But for now, he had returned to the North District at Yellow Wood City. - jess_weston4dRespondeu a xXLordKhaosXx13
difficulty or rarity of technique maybe, or because it was derived from a higher level technique
Ninth-Class Thirteen Autumn Rain Swords. High Level: 500/4000. - jess_weston4dComentouCh 51 Chapter 50: Suggestive Language!
- jess_weston5dComentouCh 30 Chapter 28 Rescue
- jess_weston5dComentou
I like your idea, I wish more people did it for magic novels and fics. whether it be a magic core, drawing a magic circle in your mind palace, or tracing out runes in your mind. I like reading about the process, granted those can get quite info dumpy for some. warlock of the Magus World had a good mix but I feel like some of it was just brushed passed and could have been explored more.
Ch 118 The link for original novel