I don't know if I reviewed this book with this account or with another. But no matter, I wanted to review this novel. Author, ganbate! I really love the content!
Considering that the author mostly writes in 3rd POV, I would say she's much better with it. However, I really want to see her write another FPOV. This first chapter is like letting us stare at food, but not be able to eat it.
I like how you made this first chapter. I think you should try to write more in this perspective. Though, I'm not pressuring you to. Please write in any style that is comfortable for you.
I have high expectations for this novel. It has great development. Though the pace is a little slow and I see no interesting plot happening, I feel as though I can immerse myself as the MC. It truly makes me think that you are a great writer, Mr/Miss Author.