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Doors are for the weak. I use the mighty window.
a good funny rant
I feel bad for Jaimes...his name is John, right?
Nah, the pic is more of a rapier-class sword than a gladius.
Attention everyone! If your looking for this story go on sufficient velocity, the person posting all these books was mistaken in the site of origin. Toward the person posting this novel thanks you very much for your time and patience in placing these lovely little story under my radar Ive already found a few fun stories to read on my down time thanks to your posting. Well have a nice day everyone!
okay, your story premise is interesting. You really need a better way in screening your chapter. The mistake with all the, he and she add nothing but confusion in the story. I suggest getting an app or programme that will deal with this, or at the very least help with your grammar. thanks for the story, keep it up.
Personally, I like the fact that the MC has trouble with communicating with his sword. I leave room for growth for the character, I'm really enjoying your story keep it up. Thanks for posting.
Limps? did you mean limbs or arms?
wait? Is the mc male or female I'm so confused.
wait? what? why isn't he in a foster home or at an orphanage? If he is left alone, then in which country is that allowed? Since most countries wouldn't leave a child of 12 alone in a house or even an apartment by themselves. I just know this is going to bug me the whole time.
This new reveal for the mc will no doubt change his point of view of what he knew. I wonder if his mother was pressured away or into that familly. From my memory she didn't seem to hate the mc father, so I'm very curious in seeing where the author will take this no doubt sad part of his parents past. On the other hand I wonder if the mc ever consider taking yang chakra from naruto. I mean the boy has it in abundance, or perhaps he has dismiss this possibility in view of the high risk in potential danger, such action could bring down on the child he has safe guard all these years. Thanks for the chapter, keep it up.