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i certainly feel that as well. the storyline i thought up is fae too restrictive and the charm of this novel is its useless banter. if i put too much nonsense, there won't be much of a story progression so im hard pressed on whether to pick one or the other. But don't worry, I dont plan to give up on Bob and his friends.
well, yes
yea, the tournament took like 50 chapters which was longer than i expected. Although, I did set foreshadows so that it doesn't seem too out of place.
yep. thats a mistake. ill change that at once thank you, kind sir.
yea. i didn't have an outline at this stage. wait, i still dont
heavy is ded?
It's a unique find. I'm guessing the perspective of this novel is an experiment by the author and I find that fascinating. I'll be honest, I am not too keen at scrutinizing written text but I could not find any errors that disrupt the flow of the story. The story development aspect, I haven't read enough to properly rate. Still, as the reader is the main character, it is difficult to keep the reader perspective element. So I'd like to know how this goes. Update stability. It's a new book with 32 chapters. All in all. It's pretty interesting. I wouldn't say its the best since this isn't my type of novel but I think it's great nonetheless.