the only thing that is annoying is the system, the story would be better if it didn't have

Kinda sad that Zoro didn't awaken his cursed energy

I think now that he's kind of dead he's going to awaken the cursed energies? so far she is maintaining herself with just haki, the abnormal physique from one piece

I was thinking that the haki would be some kind of soul manipulation technique, since I think the power of Zoro's haki would translate into the jujutsu universe. since Haki is the ability to sense spiritual energy (Kenbunshoku), use vital force (Busoshoku) and dominate enemies (Haoshoku).

It would be interesting for him to use the blue silver Emperor's ring to become the first smart ring, just like Jueshi Tangmen does in Douluo dalu 2.... few fanfics I've read about douluo dalu explore this

Thx for the chapter

It would be cool if he brought the Gwent card game to the magical world

I'll start reading here. I was reading your fics on QQ, but as I read them on (Google Translate) all the words have errors when I put them to translate, only here and on scribblehub can I read them translated

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I think that the protagonist staying with Gloriana was the least satisfying path in the soap operas I read... seriously, most of the time I want her to die so Ves can find a more charismatic heroine

one thing that can happen and that he can be an infiltrator in the crew seeking to know about the change that happened to Crocodile. It would make a lot of sense for him to be an infriuado, the guy has been brainwashed and is totally faithful to the celestial dragons

just waiting for her to find a na'vi to date...

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Happy Christmas! Thanks for the chapter

man that was so sudden and dark, so far there hasn't even been a hint of mc having that killer instinct. Besides, he couldn't walk on a cloud if he had to, a pure heart isn't just thinking about perverted things....

interesting, he has the pole that lengthens, and he knows the transformations now he just needs to win the flying cloud and he will have all the powers of the real Sun Wukong. (besides the fact that he has to learn to fight as a martial artist)

Thanks for the chapter

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Imagen do MC ?

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