Craxx_Real

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If i remember correctly it was on the bloodline list in this fanfic.

So far in the story, there is only one female lead character which is Terumi Mei.

The repetition of losses mother, grandmother, friends, clansmen reflects Uchiha Izumi’s overwhelming grief and desperation, which are crucial to her character. Trimming this would strip away the emotional depth and build-up needed to convey her resolve for revenge. In Japanese and Chinese storytelling, repetition is often used to convey emotional weight and intensity. Instead of aiming for brevity, characters may repeat certain words or phrases to emphasize how deeply they feel or how significant an event is. This style reflects the idea that strong emotions like grief, anger, or determination aren’t easily summed up in a few words. For example, when Uchiha Izumi lists all the people they’ve lost, the repetition serves to show her overwhelming pain and how each loss compounds the others. It also mirrors real-life emotional outbursts, where people might express themselves in a repetitive way because their emotions are too intense for neatly structured speech. While some readers prefer concise dialogue, not every scene should prioritize brevity, especially those dealing with trauma.

While it's true that Akira Toriyama mentioned S-cells in an interview as a requirement for the Super Saiyan transformation, it doesn't contradict the role of emotions. Emotions, particularly intense anger, are the trigger for activating the S-cells, which allow the transformation. Saiyans need a sufficient number of S-cells to transform, but emotional intensity plays a critical role in activating them. Moreover, most documented transformations in the series, including Goku and Vegeta’s, occur in response to extreme emotional states, reinforcing the traditional narrative that emotions are crucial.

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The original raw story is still incomplete, and I’m unsure if Granola will be included in it.

Done, thanks!

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