Shameless author here. Trying to see if I have a knack for writing. Do let me know in the review if I should continue the story or not.
I have incorporated the few elements of fanfiction that I like over the years, hopefully it resonates with some of you out there.
Excellent story development, character building, and world background.
However, I think the author needs to hire an editor or two.
Otherwise, this is an excellent kingdom building story in a sort of progression genre.