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Excellent writing!! I find the writing style very soothing and relaxing which makes sentences like "Oh dear god, Is my father Houdini?" very humorous to me. It doesn't have a lot of action so far other than training but it is still an enjoyable read. I look forward to how the plot will develop in the future.
I have really enjoyed reading this work and I am looking forward to your updates! The main character is OP but the way it is handled in the writing keeps a serious tone. A lot of writers when developing an OP character lose me as a reader because it just becomes too ridiculous - it loses its "serious tone". I am a reader not a writer so I am sure there is a better way to "say what I mean". If you like OP characters, give this work a chance and read it!
Excellent writing! I love the direction of the plot so far - I hope you continue with this work. Write for those of us who love the story "as is"! To me, a writer loses their creativity and control of their work when they try to fix what the negative comments say is wrong i.e. writing for those who want to change it. I hope I didn't "overstep" in my comments but I noticed low ratings that I didn't understand the "why". All online writers have my utmost respect because they have the courage to write and let the world read it!!