The plot was a little common but that's what makes this hard to write, it still managed to stand among the rest and although the delivery might need some improvement, it managed to caught my attention. 💓💓💓

This is good! 💓👏

Her name sounds so pretty!

I'm just putting this out there, but you are very much welcome to comment and review. I would really appreciate it! If you need a review swap if I have time, I can also do that 💓

This writing style could be associated with how japanese-based translators do their work. There are no other problem and I really like the MC! But if someone would be to nitpick, the sudden change of tenses in the paragraph could make someone stop reading for a moment. But it's still a good story overall! 💓

The story was very well written! And I suppose the writing style would also work perfectly if the author chose to write a comedy oriented novel. I really like this!

Is this supposed to be Imbibition? Or just Imbition?

I like how the author changes their perspective! The premise was handled very well too. There are some cases where some sentences does not fit well with the paragraph but nonetheless, everything works fine. Good work, Author-sama!

There are minor mistakes in some of the punctuations in the later chapters but it does not take away from the beauty of the story, great work!

This novel has a very good quality except from some natural whoops here and there (from not having an editor I suppose). If you're the type to like very descriptive novels then I guess this is for you! I like the author's writing style very much.

This is good! Might as well comment since you write so well! I'm liking the story so far, you had totally combined some premise from western and eastern novels and I quite like it.

In terms of writing it could have improvement but compared to the other novels written here I would prefer this writing style. I think the author could handle constant updates, so hats of to them. We've yet to see the development of the story and I already can't wait! I also like the premise, I'm really bias about my preference for Greek Gods so I think I would stick to this.

The translators/author should change this

this is so funny lmao

That's nice he doesn't discriminate 🥲

Hey, is this yours? I'm pretty sure this is VixenTail's