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Whisper's of my soul

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What is Whisper's of my soul

Leia o romance Whisper's of my soul escrito pelo autor Ace_of_your_heart publicado no WebNovel. (This is a rewrite of my first novel embracing the shadows because I was not able to connect to the story I decided to stop it if I cannot connect with it how will the readers even though most of the ...

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(This is a rewrite of my first novel embracing the shadows because I was not able to connect to the story I decided to stop it if I cannot connect with it how will the readers even though most of the things will be the same I will change things that I didn't like, Atleast give it a try) Daemon is a normal boy who always tries hard in his studies for the recognition of his peers but fails to do so, even though he didn't have friends to play with and was often bullied for his long hair he never complained. Because he was not truly alone as there was one girl always with him and he thought everything would change with time. But the reality is cruel to everyone one day everything changed for him as he started to hear a voice in his head whispering how this world is cruel and you need power to control it. After some incidents which lead him to compel towards the darker side, he succumbed to the darkness within and let his other side out. How he will live a double life solving the mysteries of this world and the voice in his mind. How will his life change as the darkness engulf him? Let's find out. Even though the story is based in India for my Convenience I will change names because This is a story based on alternate earth and there will be many changes, not the same earth (I am a newby author and I hope you give me an honest response I am willing to correct my mistakes so write a review, English is not my first language just so you know) (I am writing this novel on my phone of course because I don't have money for buying a laptop.) ( patreon.com/Piyush_eternal ) (This is my Patreon account new to that too so tell me if anything is important for the time being. I will appreciate your support )

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Ace_of_your_heart
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I am giving it a five star because of my hard work other things are decided by you people as I write on phone it is difficult and because I got no money it is very difficult for me to get help from an editor or proofreader so I had to spend most of the time finding my mistakes I hope my hard work gets it recognition

Honey_God
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The story has very nice potential but somethings needs to be improved I hope author buys a laptop or PC so his writing quality improves

PacsinateDiz
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There are grammar mistakes and some repetitive words and so on but the idea of the novel is good. If the grammars and such improves then it would be a hit

Sunil_Singh_6445
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for now I will give it a 5 star because it is written on the phone and I did not find any grammar mistakes

Altansarnai
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This is some amazing work. I was intrigued by synopsis. I only feel it has very few chapters. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Dixerqua
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Truly amazed by the world-building. The synopsis is promising and the book is engaging from the beginning, keep up the good work!!! No major grammatical errors either.

Noxx_In
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Good one to drink a coffee with, well if you see this try it atleast once.

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