webnovel

Vongola The Sky King

Anime & Comics
Concluído · 1.2M Modos de exibição
  • 56 Chs
    Conteúdo
  • 4.7
    31 Avaliações
  • NO.200+
    APOIO

What is Vongola The Sky King

Leia o romance Vongola The Sky King escrito pelo autor LazySatanixDevil publicado no WebNovel. This Story was Dropped A while back Please take a look at the rewrite, https://www.webnovel.com/book/khr-prime-generation-system_19567425106784905As Tsuna was called No good Tsuna most of his life but...

Sinopse

This Story was Dropped A while back Please take a look at the rewrite, https://www.webnovel.com/book/khr-prime-generation-system_19567425106784905 As Tsuna was called No good Tsuna most of his life but one day he changed and made himself known as Prodigy Tsuna, One day he was fused with a soul from the void. As his life began to more involved in the mafia world he became the strongest. picture link.https://www.zerochan.net/2171982

Tags
4 tags
Você também pode gostar

Hindsight for the win

Noah had worked his whole life to provide for his ‘family’ until his dying day when he discovered that they were never really his…then his best friend and business partner along with his wife and ‘son’ had upped sticks and fucked off with all his money and left him penny-less with no way to afford the life saving medicine that was so easily attainable just days before. The police have told him that they have no idea where they went, the insurance company has told him they can’t pay him until they have completed they’re investigation by which point he’ll be dead. And to top it all off that he had to give up his bed for a paying patient. Almost laughing at how his life had turned out in this new era, where he trod down his dreams to provide for his ‘family’ instead of chasing adventure in space and potentially evolving with a lucky encounter in the limitless worlds that were the major discovery of the new era. But no. He gave it all up to take responsibility. And to ‘do the right thing’. Well fuck that noise. In front of all the deliverers of his bad news he ripped out all the needles slipped on some shoes and jumped out the open window. Follow Noah as he wakes up in his younger body and takes advantage of all his knowledge of the next 40 years whilst only looking out for number one and a friend he lost too soon. *first time writer, just a fan of the genre and thought I’d give it a go. No shits given if you don’t like it. Many shits given if you love it ;) Open to constructive criticism but let’s keep it PG. *basically it starts off as a reincarnation, what would you do differently sort of novel which will grow into a sci-fi space and new world adventure in later chapters. *might add some romance/r18 down the line if I get that far

Merrypotomous · Ficção Científica
Classificações insuficientes
5 Chs
Índice
Latest Update
Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1

Avaliações

  • Taxa Geral
  • Qualidade de Escrita
  • Atualizando a estabilidade
  • Desenvolvimento de Histórias
  • Design de Personagens
  • Antecedentes do mundo
Opiniões
Gostava
Mais recente
Darkmusho
DarkmushoLv13Darkmusho

You just made my year finally a fanfic of hitman reborn thank you so much I'm looking forward to reading it and if you ever need help I can help I read all the books and all the anime. keep up the great work.

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!,  I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's,  I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!

Sirrow
SirrowLv14Sirrow

Rly this is too much you know the story is nothing but bulschit System skills are too easy acuried and rly........ 13j and you are dating kyoko 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪😪🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

donthebest22
donthebest22Lv12donthebest22

okay this is just ridiculous people who write reviews and don't give any constructive criticism is absolute trash that's right you are smooth brain retards that only deserve to be dog shut on the side walk, not that's over back to the real review. this story has a lot of potential i would have made a review later but due to some smooth brain "retards" who don't have anything else to do other than complain that they can't write because their trash.... aside from another of potential it has class, this is a good short read and its does need more chapters it has interesting characters they all have something going for them and this is a really good semi gender bent novel not only does the author keep most of their traits of the original characters he places a twist here and there while also making it believable that they are women. *this is literally all i can say at the moment because it needs more chapters xD looking at you author... Next is the grammar and its great not many mistakes or missed placed words or phrases an enjoyable read and that's saying a lot for this website some fictions are just unreadable. so that is literally all I have because it only has 17 chapters as of time of this review so keep up the good work author

FurudoErika
FurudoErikaLv5FurudoErika

my only problem with this novel is your writing technique(grammar, paragraph, typos). Your grammar is not that bad and the novel is still readable but i suggest you try to find an editor or smt coz it will help you a lot in this department. next. then each of your paragraph is so long, try to divide them into a more smaller one, and if your character think / saying something, try to separate them from your narrative as it will help us, reader a lot. overall i still like your premise, it's rare to find KHR fanfic so try to find an editor / try to up your skill ^^ thx and don't stop writing

LazySatanixDevil
LazySatanixDevilAutorLazySatanixDevil

Shameless author review 5 star review. And please point out some of my mistakes and please give some criticism so I can improve the errors in my novel

ShaggyJoestar69
ShaggyJoestar69Lv4ShaggyJoestar69

Finally a hitman reborn fanfic on this site you know how long I've been waiting for this.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊I'm really enjoying the story so for I wanna see how the author deals with the other characters.

Ishya_Chan
Ishya_ChanLv4Ishya_Chan

Good. . . . . . . . . . . . .

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!,  I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's,  I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!,  I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's,  I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!,  I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's,  I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

Well, is it a good work? Eh, I'm not sure. I was really in idea of reborn fanfic with harem and for the male audience. Without genderbend tsuna who goes for all boys. But that's like abrigade version of original with worse grammar. Should I commend and praise for keeping this r-15 shounen vibe of the story? I'm not sure, it's feel bland. Especially how characters interact between each other's. That's need a lot of work for sure. Either way, I'm a weird guy that actually see potential of flame powers and most weird, in gender-bend of some characters. But than we have a lot of friendship is magic bs that I highly dislike, with a lot of boys in a group that I certainly don't care in harem fanfics. And a lot of boring trainings, sure they're important for future build up. But you can watch anime and get that training don't take that much time, and most importantly, they are connected to some minor stories to keep audience interested. In the end. I willing to like the concept of work, idea behind it. But what exactly I read not inspiring and boring.

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

This novel is really good, but the grammar is killing my eyes. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------=======================================================+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!,  I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's,  I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!

Excavelier
ExcavelierLv3Excavelier

Finally a khr fanfic .sjsiwmfjqjndbsyjdyiccuydyyxf uufcjfxucu ufkxiyfx yfix .ykx f yxjrjcyxjyjx yriydr yidr iyfvuvvuidtitdcutcdutcitdcdticudcutiductduudtcuu

Henrique_Paiao
Henrique_PaiaoLv6Henrique_Paiao

[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!,  I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's,  I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!

GoldCrownz
GoldCrownzLv2GoldCrownz

Please make more large the chapter. VdhshshshshhshshshExpexoexoeoxoexepxp3xepxepxepxrpxdpexpexoexpexprxprocpdxpcoxpdppsbshdhshshdgdhshhdgshshshshbsbsbsbsbsbsbbsbsbssbshajajajqjjqnwbw

SilentKidd
SilentKiddLv1SilentKidd

very interesting story, love it! keep going with this book because it's amazing it got me hooked the first 5 seconds you got some serious talent man good job 👍

APOIO

Mais sobre este livro

General Audiencesmature rating
Relatório