Trapped Inside My Favorite Novel

I am THOROUGHLY enjoying this story!! Please keep up the good work. [img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=golden ticket][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

All in all, a great find. A work that has a lot of potential if the Author doesn't give up, something that unfortunately happens a lot. The main characters, especially the MC, have a great backstory, which allows for some really cool psychological depth. The world scenario has still been little explained, such as whether there are other races besides humans, how many continents there are, etc. I hope that the author manages to polish this work with a lot of potential, paying attention to the psychological aspects of the characters, something fundamental for a great work, as well as the interactions of the MC and his past with the character Quil, something that honestly makes me a little uncomfortable, because many problems that don't involve Elias (but since he's in a different body), he ends up taking on unnecessary responsibility. However, I think his role as a "good" antagonist is really cool in a certain way, giving space for the Author to do really cool things. All in all, a very good work that certainly deserves to be read, I hope the Author doesn't give up.

first one

I re-read the story and I still enjoy it. I hope the author returns from hiatus. p

Well, it's a decent novel, but it’s not really to my taste. The main character is too forgiving and gets pushed around constantly. Even when people try to kill him, he just forgives them and lets them go. He very well knows that the terrible deeds were committed by the body's previous owner, but to protect himself, he should be more ruthless. He already lost his sister in his past life, yet he still acts like Gary Stu.