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Training Pokemon

For a while I have read over all the cut and paste concepts on the Pokemon world trying to make the host strong as well as his Pokemon using the gamer system. I understand it's a dangerous world and you want to give the MC extra plot Armour. I thought about this and realized that the host would rarely fight in matters that needed strength except in situations that dealt with Legendaries. If that becomes par for course though in the story. What's the point of making this a long term novel that deals with the growth of a character. I would've set this as a short novel that deals with an overpowered MC that one shots all situations that need it. Also I wish to point out that Pokémon have sentience. The world also has abundant food with berries being around and the things that happen in Pokedex's in the games, I'm gonna try to stay partially away from as this is rated at a rating lower than 18+. (That's mostly because I find cursing unnecessarily to be just plain bad etiquette. I can understand if it happens when something bad occurs and you can't control your mouth. But flippant use of them just to annoy people is just that. Annoying...) The original story is also about friendship, journeying, and finding a purpose in the world they're in with their friends. Sabrina, Dawn, and May deal with contests. While Ash, and Iris love battling. Brock even finds a purpose on his journey as a breeder fully going into the field instead of just pursuing it as a side hobby like before when he had to take care of his brothers. As such I find it, while not useless for writing. A complete disappointment and withdrawal from the nature of what this world represents. What with hope and friendship being these main parts, and if you're fighting every creature you meet into submission. How is it possible for you to truly bond beyond servant and subject. Another thing is inside this story I will not limit the host to having 6 Pokemon on his being. No this would only apply to gyms or competitions as these kinds of things would require a more formal structure. I have decided on a new idea for this system that instead focuses on the Pokemon themselves. This includes knowledge, buffs, items and so on. The system will be less of a RPG stat layout directly as this still exists. But the stats come from training with the other stuff like others would train in a real world. The exception being Buffs. He can also use the system to build a utopia for his Pokemon. He can even slow down the time inside to gain larger training time later on for specific species which grow slower like Ninetails or various Ghost Pokemon. Enough of this Synopsis and rant though and on to the story. Ps. It's obvious, but I don't own this image. So I take no credit for it. And if someone eventually would like to make an image for this story I will thank you. Sincerely. PPS: Comments help me keep my want to write. When I notice there's not a lot of comments. I second guess my writing, like a lot. Probably for a good reason as I know I like to over analyze things, and I KNOW that's gonna influence my writing. I can see it deeply ingrained. So if you guys like my style please comment.

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Chapter 22-Welcome To My World

Waving good bye towards the officer Jenny I grew excited at the thought of owning this building, and now that I was the owner I held nothing but joy within me. Looking over at my partner I couldn't help but joke around. "Hey Emblaze do you think I should use some water to help us cool down from this excitement. Maybe a water gun would help." Thanks to the joke I was once more tied to a tree with the rope from earlier getting beat up. The Rattata seemed to be laughing at the whole situation, and it appeared to calm down at seeing the trainer not retaliating even when hurt by his Pokemon.

Getting let down once more by the irritated lizard I looked over at my partner seriously. Getting the message he faced me with his patience waiting for me to finish. "Emblaze. I have a new surprise for you as well as any other Pokemon I get." Nodding the lizard asked the obvious thing "What is it?" Smiling I pointed at the building, and walked over to it when a feeling wrapped around all three of us. Putting my hand up to a spot just a couple feet from the main door the feeling expanded and brought us into a whole new plane of existence.

When going through the portal I could swear though something smiled at me. I knew it wasn't evil, in fact it was a pure but chaotic creature. What ever it was though I ignored it for now. Making it to the other side we were surrounded by my enclosed tiny world. The Pokemon behind me didn't know whether to admire the sight of a separate world, or be disappointing that it wasn't something extraordinarily spectacular.

"This here is my own personal world," I shouted aloud with a bit of pride. Getting a nod from the other two I wondered for a second if others also have them to not get a reaction out of the two.

Emblaze who understood the fact that me making my eyebrows raise meant I didn't understand their lack of excitement sighed in pity. Deciding to enlighten it's human is started talking "While it indeed is impressive that you actually have one of these realms.

Your like the thousandth one that is known to own one now. After all if I had to guess your Portal was created either from your Aura, or Garitina gave you this. If it's the second option though could you please introduce me. I always though she was a cute girl." That comment of course got him smacked in the back of his head by a certain Rattata for stepping on it's idle's name.

Ignoring the fight that started breaking out between the Pokemon I Nodded my head with a thankful expression in my mind at being able to use these techniques which are blamable on Aura I looked around my small place with a smirk and got a message from my system.

"Pokemon Emblaze has been given right to open this room and invite others in even without your consent."

Smiling in thanks towards my system for taking care of that for me I snapped my fingers just like the system told me and left with the other two. Finally finished explaining things to Emblaze about how to enter that place and it's features according to the system I headed off into another direction. Blocks and Berries. The same place I had accidentally ignored last time. Running off I watched the other two follow this time with a bit more enthusiasm.

I knew in that one moment We were going to be OK, and that We were going to have a good life.

The Capitalization in the last sentence is important to stress the thoughts of the character.

This chapter has been revised.

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