The Pict Magic Of Fairy Tail

hopefully he can become like Rill from Black Clover

I'll be blunt, this is boring. Your MC is bland, his magic has a lot of potential but you went with "sCiEncE iS m4g1c" bullshit.

Read seven chapters in, there is nothing good about this story so far. You seriously need to explain what is going on in the story, at first you said he had a cheat power, then he had an information downloading system, you explained the main character's magic at least three different ways, changing what it does every time and you started the story off in a bad direction. If you had the power to copy any one magic of a person, as a child, you should just run straight in the guild and collide with someone you know has good magic, and then explain it away by that you were too excited about finally being able to join a magic guild or whatever. That's it, it's that simple. Not whatever this is.

This book is incredibly well written and executed quite well. It’s still very early of course and so the current chapters aren’t the most exciting but it is still very enjoyable and relaxing to read. Please keep writing Author, you are very talented and don’t feel the need to rush or drop due to criticism.