I’m not really writing anything new but, yeah this story is just a let down. From the way he acquired his magic being done somewhat poorly, to the fact it “Evolved” when everything about it is worse then the original which is incorrect compared to canon since he says Reese’s can only draw on himself which is wrong, to the forcing science into the magic, and finally to the Cheat suddenly being able to deliver relevant information about whatever the mc needs. I feel like the author was going for a Naruto: Wind Calamity but made a bad choice in both the world and delivery of it, since fairy tails magic is mainly emotion driven, and instead of focusing on magic itself he changed the magic to science so he could make it complicated without making the mc op, which might not have been a problem if this wasn’t to make the magic reach a usable level. What do I mean? The mc in order to make a knife that can even cut anything he must know its atomic structure, which implies he can’t create anything too complicated like a living being or anything that doesn’t exist like Reedus can since they don’t have an atomic structure. If you were going to “evolve” his magic then you should’ve added a function like sealing or a copy ability so he can spam his creations.
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