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The Other Wife [a Laapataa Ladies fanfic]

Two newlyweds find themselves inadvertently separated from their husbands moments after their respective weddings. ɪɴꜱᴘɪʀᴇᴅ ʙʏ ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴏᴠɪᴇ, "ʟᴀᴀᴘᴀᴛᴀᴀ ʟᴀᴅɪᴇꜱ"

indig0jesse · Urbano
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19 Chs

New Husband, New Shoes

Deepak's bride - Jaya, though no one knew her name yet - remained rooted in place, too stunned and mortified to move or even lift her gaze from the dusty ground. Around them, the lively musicians' instruments slowly fell silent one by one, their joyful notes evaporating into the tension blanketing the space.From across the compound, Bholaram turned towards his son with a thunderous look, his barrel chest visibly heaving with escalating rage. "Deepu!" He bellowed, making a beeline through the throngs. "What is the meaning of this? Who is this woman you've brought into our household?"The crowd parted like waves before Bholaram, whose imposing figure suddenly towered over his hapless son. Deepak opened and closed his mouth uselessly for several moments, only managing to emit a strangled clucking sound not unlike a distressed chicken.He swallowed hard, shrinking slightly under his father's furious glare before finally finding his voice. "B-Baba...there was a m-mistake on the t-train..." Deepak sputtered out, his face flushing beet red with mortification. "She isn't...isn't Phool. I d-don't know who she is."Spinning around on his heel, he leveled the mystery bride with a pleading, desperate look. "Behen, p-please, tell us who you are and how this happened!"After what felt like an eternity, Jaya finally lifted her chin with what little resolve she could muster. Though visibly trembling, she recounted in halting tones the entire sequence of events - the seating confusion on the train, Deepak mistaking her for his real bride, her rash decision to disembark with him rather than correcting the error.As her tale unfolded, a chorus of mocking laughter and colorful side-commentary began to ripple through the onlookers. More than a few bystanders made snide jokes about the poor farmer so foolish as to lose track of his wife. One particularly rude uncle let out a loud guffaw and pretended to shield his eyes in embarrassment over the drama.The weight of public humiliation seemed to crash over Deepak in waves as Jaya's story concluded. His shoulders slumped impossibly lower with each fresh peal of ridicule from the assembled crowd. Eventually, he sank hopelessly to his knees in the swirling dust, hot tears of shame streaking his reddened face as his fantasies of a joyful homecoming shattered like spun sugar against the hard ground.The riotous laughter and mocking jeers reached a crescendo as little Bablu began scampering around the compound, singing at the top of his lungs. "Deepu swapped auntie! Deepu swapped auntie!"The impish child's singsong chant was quickly taken up by the other giggling youngsters who rapidly formed a little conga line, weaving between the adults' legs while gleefully parroting the humiliating taunt. "Swapped auntie! Swapped auntie!""Poonam-bhabhi, kya kar rahe ho?" Yashoda hissed urgently at her daughter-in-law, who was struggling to contain her laughter at Bablu's antics. "Quickly, take the children inside before they broadcast this catastrophe to the entire village!"Reluctantly, Bablu's mother began herding the squealing pack away from the unfolding drama, shooing them towards the inner quarters despite their raucous protests. As the childish voices slowly faded, an awkward hush fell over the remaining onlookers, punctuated only by a few muffled titters.In the tense silence, one of Deepak's friends materialized at his side, having extracted himself from the watching crowd. He squatted down beside his kneeling companion, eyes wide with stunned disbelief."Yaar...tu kaise ki khoi apni nayi bahu?" The friend murmured, shaking his head slowly. "You...you lost your wife? Just like that?"The naked pity in his voice seemed to pierce Deepak's humiliated fugue. He lifted his reddened gaze to meet his old friend's concerned stare, mouth opening and closing uselessly once more.Suddenly, a gruff baritone shattered the weighted pause, causing both men to start violently."Unbelievable!" Bholaram's blustery tones cut through the compound like a whipcrack. He stood with fists planted firmly on his hips, glaring at his youngest son with smoldering disappointment and disgust."Your honorable ancestors must be recoiling in their graves over this blunder, Deepak. Have you no sense of responsibility as a grahasti?" Bholaram's thunderous voice sliced through the weighted silence once more, each gruff syllable Landing like a anvil blow against Jaya's rattled composure."How could you be so foolish, so careless?" The imposing patriarch rounded on his youngest son with undisguised disgust etched into the crevices of his weathered face. "To not even recognize the woman walking at your side? You could be forgiven for mistaking a piece of luggage, an umbrella, even your old cycle..."His meaty hands gesticulated wildly as the dressing-down reached a fever pitch. "But an entire human being, Deepak? How? How could you bring another man's wife into our household?"The scathing rebuke sliced straight through Jaya's heart like a blazing sword. She felt herself instinctively bristle, eager to leap to Deepak's defense.After all, was the blame not hers to share as well? She had willingly followed him from the train station despite realizing his mistake, too cowardly or feckless to voice the truth. If anyone deserved such brutal censure, it was the woman who had deceptively usurped poor Phool's rightful place at the groom's side through her silence.Before she could give voice to her regrets, Deepak straightened his shoulders with sudden resolve. Though his eyes still glistened with unshed tears of humiliation, his tone was firm and insistent as he met his father's blistering tirade head-on."But Pitaji, they were both in matching crimson bridal wear," he implored, gesturing down at the swaths of fabric still clinging to Jaya's frame. "Identical red saris with embroidery and beaded veils covering every inch. How could I possibly distinguish between two identically-dressed stranger brides on that dark, crowded train?"Deepak's father, his voice booming like thunder, bellowed at his son. "Shut up, you insolent fool!"Poor Deepak shrank back, his mouth zipped tighter than a miser's coin purse. But just then, an unexpected ally rose up on his behalf."He's right," Jaya piped up, her gentle voice cutting through the awkward silence. "Why, these veils are as opaque as blinders on a donkey! With this tent of cloth before our eyes, we'd struggle to identify our own husbands, let alone yours."You could hear the scandalized gasps rippling through the crowd like a hot breeze through the desert. A woman speaking up so boldly? In this family? Unheard of!Deepak's eyes darted towards Jaya, locking with her warm, reassuring smile that seemed to say, "Don't worry, I've got your back on this one." He felt his tensed shoulders relax ever so slightly.His father, however, would not be so easily swayed. "Well then," he huffed, "By your own logic, how could you not recognize Deepu at the very least? Even with that shroud shielding your eyes, surely you'd know these feet!" He thrust out at Deepak's worn-out shoes for emphasis.Without missing a beat, Jaya replied airily, "New husband, new shoes." A teasing lilt played at the edges of her words.Another shock rippled through the onlookers, though this time tinged with amusement. This woman had a deft tongue!Not wanting to be drawn further into her verbal parries, Deepak's father harrumphed. "Enough of this nonsense! We should be worrying about finding Phool, not squabbling over veils and shoes!""Precisely my point," Jaya agreed, deftly turning the conversation her way. "We're wasting precious time. Deepak?" She nodded towards the exit. "Your wife needs you."For a frozen moment, Deepak remained kneeling in the swirling dust, seemingly drowning in a sea of scorn surrounding him from all sides. Then, a single anguished syllable reached his ears, jolting his senses back to life:"Phool..."The name of his true bride instantly resurfaced the hapless man's memories. He scrambled gracelessly to his feet, eyes wild and unfocused as the horror of Phool's plight saturated his consciousness.His wife - abandoned, alone, who knows where at this very moment while he'd been canoodling with a stranger! All thoughts of embarrassment fled as Deepak let out a strangled cry, seizing the closest thing at hand - his friend's battered cycle.Without a word of explanation, the young bridegroom flung one leg over the metal frame and began pumping the pedals furiously. He careened away from the mocking spectators, churning up a thick cloud of dust as he raced headlong towards the village's outskirts and the distant train platform in pursuit of his lost bride.Behind him, the compound slowly sank back into silence, the only sounds the fading pleas of "Phool...Phool?" drifting back like the lamentations of a mournful spirit. In his wake, Jaya stood rooted in place, keenly aware of dozens of scrutinizing eyes burning into her back from all sides.

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