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The Forgotten Man

This is the story of a man who has forgotten everything about himself. He's going to try to get his memories back while also trying to survive in this fictional world thats infested with Monster and just general dangers around every corner whether it be figuratively or literaly. *Warning* There will be swearing in this. To me a character who gets hurt or experiences something terrible won't just be like "Oh gosh darn it I've been stabbed!" that doesn't seem realistic to me. I want my characters to seem a little more "human" or "alive." If you don't agree with swearing or don't like it I'm truly sorry but it's just how I'm going to be making this story. There are plenty of amazing stories to read on this app you don't have to read my sub-par writings.

Derikari · Fantasia
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Chapter #1 Where Am I?

[Pain...]

[Why am I hurting?]

[Its dark...]

[Am I alive?]

[I'm definitely alive, I need to open my eye's.]

"Where the hell am I!?"

As I open my eye's I see something that sends chills down my spine. Mutilated corpses, and lots of them. Old and young, weak and strong, armoured and unarmored. Theres atleast twenty of them for sure.

"What the... what happened here?"

I try to remember what happened but I just can't. I can't even remember who I am.

"Well It looks like this place is either temporarily safe or extremely dangerous." "I need to find something to defend myself just in case."

I walk towards the bodies and out of fear I hold my breath and walk as quietly as I can.

I then grab a blood stained sword, but as soon as I touch it it disappears.

"Wait where'd it go?" "I swear i just grabbed it, am I hallucinating?"

"Come here." There was a voice speaking to me. I take a few steps backward.

I then walk back to where I had woken up. "Come here." It's the same volume as before. [Is it inside my head or something?]

"I'm here to help you so stop avoiding me and come closer." [It sounds annoyed, maybe I should listen atleast a little bit.] "How would I come closer to you if I don't know where you are?"

*Sigh* "I'm on the top of the pile." "Be careful though, theres a Goblin around the corner to your left."

To be honest this chapter was a little difficult to make. I had to think of a lot of idea's and delete a couple drafts for this. I'm not good at coming up with this whole creating a fictional world with indepth characters and and an interesting plot that would hook people in. I'm trying my best though and I'll continue doing so unless something comes up. If you guys like this story or have any idea's for future things then please leave a comment. If I use your idea I'll tell everyone it was you.

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