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The First Legacies Of Zion: Omaye

Autor: Anone
Fantasy
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What is The First Legacies Of Zion: Omaye

Leia o romance The First Legacies Of Zion: Omaye escrito pelo autor Anone publicado no WebNovel. The sun, earths own star and sustainer of life is about to go supernova, and the ensuing solar storm is sure to wipe out all life on earth if not outright destroy the planet itself. The only hope wou...

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The sun, earths own star and sustainer of life is about to go supernova, and the ensuing solar storm is sure to wipe out all life on earth if not outright destroy the planet itself. The only hope would be to transfer the consciousness of the twelve billion people who make up the human race into a next generation virtual reality game that was designed as a way to cheat death and have an out of body experience. A broken family of five has found their way into Zion by making less than savory sacrifices. But when they get there they realize that with each passing day life in Zion gets more and more realistic, as each and every single one of them is swept up into a cacophony of events that change and mold them into a family with great power and great destiny. They will find their path in the same way many heroes before them had been forced to go through. By living, fighting, loving, and killing. But a question remains, is Zion online truly a game. On hold for now. I need to focus on my other novels. Will be back once all three reach a hundred chapters.

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Anone
AnoneAutorAnone

This story much like my other the lost Chronicles of Pangea, is not really about the action. Though this webnovel has a much more complicated birth than the last. I started writing this novel after my dad died to tell the story of my family in a way that appeals to fantasy and thrill seekers in all of us. Within the story of Nathaniel, Esther and Faith, is the hidden story about the reality and life if many people. If the Chronicles of Pangea was made to appeal to the human in all of us, I wrote this novel to appeal to the monster within. Out raw feelings, our emotions, our bonds and our needs. Our love, the thing that truly makes us more than what we are made to be. That's what this novel is all about, about how much we can hurt each other, and how much we can forgive.

lerandor
lerandorLv14lerandor

The VRMMORPG Genre is one of my all-time favorites. And I think this one is one of the better ones that I have read. I like the World Building so far, there are new and refreshingly interesting elements that i haven't found in other stories. I am really looking forward how they will overcome their difficulties.

DeJeL
DeJeLLv15DeJeL

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: With how detailed you are and how you don't seem to be trying to focus the book on a single character, but a family, I would suggest you keep with one perspective per chapter, for it seems that more people who read on webnovel prefer that. Also, as of yet, I can only feel the start of a plot, but can't see anything concrete yet. Otherwise, I would like to be able to give you more, but can't seem to find anything that I know would be complained about.;,;. Positive Feedback: The story concept is good and I like how thoroughly you built the characters, doing so without what feels like an information dump (which I didn't notice any, that's also good.;,;.) is a skill I wish I had.;,;. Personal Feedback: I normally use this space to tell the person I'm reviewing if I plan to read till the end, however, I apologize, for I cannot say as of yet. This story has a lot of potentials, however, will it go a path I wish to read or stray to another path. Once that question is answered, I will let you know if I will continue reading. Nonetheless, I implore you to maintain your novel unto the conclusion.;,;. Keep up the good work.;,;.

Mikyle_Brooks_2759
Mikyle_Brooks_2759Lv2Mikyle_Brooks_2759

I like the way you have done your other stories so of you could continue some of your other 1s I would much appreciate it I gave this story this rating so you could see this and hope you at least think about doing this

Sirocco
SiroccoLv6Sirocco

I really like this novel as I am a big fan of the litrpg genre. I favor this one over your other story mainly because I like fantasy worlds over post apocalyptic ones. Your stories feel like there is a lot at stake for the main character, which adds a new layer of depth rarely found in original novels. Keep it up! I have never been good at writing reviews, but I hope I could convey my thoughts to you.

Karitos
KaritosLv3Karitos

I like the story so far keep it up! Very good writing quality and a stable supply of new chapters. One of the best stories in the Game Elements Category.

akinpelu_tosin
akinpelu_tosinLv4akinpelu_tosin

When will you finish this novel. I don't like what you do , you just jump from one write up to another without finishing the first one. From all your novel that's what you use to do. At least finish one before you jump to another. That's the only way you can keep your readers

Anone
AnoneAutorAnone

It's becoming increasingly hard to write when people are not showing you the support you expected. Please guys, rate, review and comment. Communicate with me, so that I can understand how to reach out to you better. It would not take anything out of your body to lay down your thoughts or appreciation.

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