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The Desire Demon

Fantasy
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  • 4.8
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What is The Desire Demon

Leia o romance The Desire Demon escrito pelo autor FlameCookies publicado no WebNovel. Once upon a time, a boy was born from the frowned upon relationship between a king is and a commoner. Furthermore, the child did not have access to the system nearly everyone else possessed. His statu...

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Once upon a time, a boy was born from the frowned upon relationship between a king is and a commoner. Furthermore, the child did not have access to the system nearly everyone else possessed. His status at an all-time low, his father tries to get rid of him for power but this is when his own powers decided to awaken. Who will survive the consequences of the ensuing war? ---- Art by MichelleLeeee [HCBL II ILMA]#5111 a good friend of mine please check her out!

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Sejak pertama kali berjumpa dengan gadis yang bernama Shania,pemuda tampan dan gagah itu jatuh cinta pada pandangan pertama.Pemuda yang diketahui bernama Syauqi adalah putra bungsu ibu Halimah, yang baru dinikahi oleh pak Amir lima bulan yang lalu.Sedangkan Shania adalah putri ketiga dari pak Amir dan ibu Sari yang telah lama tiada. "Bu,sepertinya putramu menyukai Shania putriku"kata pak Amir kepada istri yang baru saja dinikahinya lima bulan lalu. "Ah masa sih pak?"sahut bu Halimah heran "Coba deh ibu perhatikan,Syauqi selalu memperhatikan Shania secara diam diam" tegas pak Amir kepada ibu Halimah. "Bagaimana kalau kita menikahkan mereka saja pak?Sebagai orang tua seharusnya kita mengalah demi kebahagiaan mereka" usul ibu Halimah kepada suaminya. "Baiklah kalau ibu setuju,bapak memberi talaq tiga kepada ibu mulai hari ini....." Pagi itu pak Amir menjatuhkan talaq tiga kepada istrinya yang bernama bu Halimah, atas persetujuan dirinya,agar Syauqi dan Shania segera menikah.Demi kebahagiaan putra dan putrinya mereka melepaskan ikatan pernikahannya,tanpa adanya drama pertengkaran dan permusuhan diantara keduanya.Mereka memutuskannya tanpa berfikir jauh dan mengalir apa adanya,pak Amir dan ibu Halimah bertekad menjalin persaudaraan dan menjadi besan keluarga. Bagaimanakah kisah cinta antara Shania dan Syauqi? dapatkah mereka menjalani pernikahannya dengan mulus? Apakah yang akan terjadi nanti dengan mereka? Tunggu kelanjutan kisah cinta kedua insan yang saling jatuh cinta ini,pada bab bab berikutnya........ Salam sayang Azzahra071

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76 Chs

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FlameCookies
FlameCookiesAutorFlameCookies

So it's your boi the author, so I'm commenting on this novel to tell you what you will expect after writing 15 chaps: Bad: 1- The first chapters will be the worst thing you'll ever read. 2- The story will be so flawed as this is my first novel. 3- I'm so bad at imagining stuff so flawed world and character building is expected. 4-Bad grammar as this is again my first novel. Good: 1- I try to make this novel the best it could be. 2- I (will when I have commenters, sad) use your thoughts to approve this novel as I want you to participate on creating this novel. 3- I'm a very hard working man. 4- I'm a very good friend. 5- I love writing so it's not expected for me to drop this one, not with all of that support. And a lot of other stuff! So please give this novel a chance, and please of you want to drop it, read until chap 10 then decide! Anyways It was your boi FlameCookie. PLEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE!

LAZY_BENGAL_TIGER
LAZY_BENGAL_TIGERLv2LAZY_BENGAL_TIGER

Loved your story really but you need to work more hard as there are many errors. Don't stop keep going and you will eventually rise to the top😉

01king_aurella
01king_aurellaLv201king_aurella

I like the story. Even in the first chap the demon is cool I like his wholesomeness like he just said 'that's an interesting human you got there, alright I will grant you your wish' it was as if they're just wishing for a piece of candy. And yeah the father's a trash too. When I hated a character that's when I know what an amazing author you are that made me hate a character. Totally like it.

Rosnocht
RosnochtLv1Rosnocht

OP MC LESGOOOOOO! AY, the comedy is great tho. this will be a great guilty pleasure reads for you! The story is unique in it's own way, but precisely the narative. KEEP IT UP AUTHOR PLZ. promise me u will edit the messy first half of your story tho. Cuz the story is good so don't let it go to waste!

Lexinor
LexinorLv2Lexinor

I... This is unbelievably good it actually makes me want to cry as a fellow author to be quite frank. There are few to no grammar mistakes from what I've read and the story continuity and general quality is just so good. I'm excited to see this author become a top writer on the website and even beyond it!

FlameCookies
FlameCookiesAutorFlameCookies

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA..... I love this story, its cool. Like me! hehehehehehehehehhe, I call this self support so dont blaim me..............

TataK43_
TataK43_Lv1TataK43_

Ah yes, a main character with stepmother. Ehem..anyways, the story itself is good. Although your paragraphs are way too long at the first chapters, I ignored that and just enjoy the story. Keep it up.

Eaagles_wings
Eaagles_wingsLv4Eaagles_wings

It has nearly everything your imagination needs in there, takes time to develop, best the best part - It is first person POV ❤️ so better to imagine myself in it...definitely recommended🙌🏻

mrant12
mrant12Lv2mrant12

Very interesting and humorous. I like the pace and the character development. Excellent story! Stay strong and keep writing! Let's hit 100 chaps at least!

Angel18k
Angel18kLv5Angel18k

The best one so far for me in fantasy. I'm loving the character development of Almer. All other characters are also good but I'm in love with Nira. Hope ML gets the happy ending.

Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv13Mary_Algen_Guiang1

I always read the author's own review first. The author humbly asked for a chance, saying this is his first book. But when I started reading the book, I can say that apologies are not necessary. I love the story plot. and I went ahead and read until Chapter 10, and I can say that the writer is doing just fine. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 10 is nothing but a flawless narration. here is a perfect 5 stars.

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