Teen Eagle

Story is not bad but I cannot give you more stars for world and characters. I don't feel any unique vibes from them yet. It might change in future. I still have weird ideas about entire eagle powers. Eagles are not pack animals if I remember correctly and shapeshifters often adapt to their animal counterparts nature. 4 stars for WQ/ SOU. It's readable and I don't really care much about grammar. Story development: 3 stars. Some changes to original plot and I wonder if you make it interesting in future or just bland. Character design/World background: Not big changes for me. At least not at this point to give you some credit for them. I will come back to check if you continue original plot or add some new things to make this unique. Good luck.

It's good hoping for the continuation. Please do finish it to complition. I really liked the minutes details from original story and keeping Scott as close to the original character. Scott's character development is good

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I'm really interested this story. I want to ask about Talons season 5. Ehat is it? It is TV serial? Maybe game lol? Idk. I was searched about it, but couldn't find anything. I found Tv serial, that has 3 season. And player or character from game, league of legend.

I really enjoy the story. to be honest I really didn't believe I'd like the eagle part but I ended up really enjoying how it turned out and how you wrote it. please continue writing and don't drop this masterpiece. the grammar and everything else is good as well.

I think it's pretty good didn't realize you started updating again tho I hope you stick with it ............................................

good. keep it up. only a few spelling mistakes such as her and she and he but keep it up. can not wait for more. keep the chapters coming. :)

Just read 1 chapter, but the story looks promising, and the writing quality is good too, so keep writing Author, Good Work..................