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daremetochoosemyna
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2021-03-15 00:46

Story is not bad but I cannot give you more stars for world and characters. I don't feel any unique vibes from them yet. It might change in future. I still have weird ideas about entire eagle powers. Eagles are not pack animals if I remember correctly and shapeshifters often adapt to their animal counterparts nature. 4 stars for WQ/ SOU. It's readable and I don't really care much about grammar. Story development: 3 stars. Some changes to original plot and I wonder if you make it interesting in future or just bland. Character design/World background: Not big changes for me. At least not at this point to give you some credit for them. I will come back to check if you continue original plot or add some new things to make this unique. Good luck.

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Yeah eagles are loners

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