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Shatter the Bad Ending!

[Restore The Crown] This was the novel that I was tasked to review as a contestant for our yearly webnovel event and as someone who had to probably read hundreds of novels by now. It was utter garbage, it was full of overdone tropes and cliches that you could have seen from a mile away. A bland and mary sue protagonist ✓ A list of heroines who fall in love and become obsessed with the protagonist instantly ✓ A myriad of villains who have no other personality other than to hate and try to kill the protagonist ✓ They were all there. Except for the surprisingly catchy title, there was no other positive thing about this novel. But was pissed me off the most was the ending. With no build-up and seemingly out of nowhere, most of the heroines were killed and the world that they lived in became hell on earth. It was literally revealed in a couple of chapters and was clearly done just to shock the readers. Honestly, I wish I could restore the time I wasted reading this novel. But as I said my criticism to the author. The f*cker shot me in the head! (I proofread my chapters by myself, sadly I am only human, so if you find any mistakes, kindly point them out and I will fix them as soon as possible) (This is my first attempt at writing novels, to those who keep on reading despite the occasional mistakes here and there, I thank you from the bottom of my heart and I will promise to be a better author, anyways have a nice day and please never build galeforce on twitch, if you do, you don't deserve 8 hours of sleep, that is all, thank you)

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Resolution (3)

After changing my uniform from the spare clothes I had in my bracelet.

I donned the mask and hid my bracelet inside my pocket.

I then checked my gun and the magazines I had left.

There were only 2 magazines remaining.

But if I shot before he activates his aura,

I would win,

The greenhouse was located on the northeast side of the academy.

It was a building covered with trees and different plants on display.

Since it was almost night most of the staff were already home.

And the people that did manage the greenhouse were probably bribed by Wyatt by now.

Everything was perfect,

I've prepared enough,

The thorns in my heart grew sharper.

But I shook them off and with soundless steps, I marched forth.

Gun on my right, dagger on my left.

Mask on my face, a black jacket on my body, and gloves covering my hands.

I steeled my resolve.

I made my way toward the rocky path leading outside the building.

Soon trees lay apparent on the side, and as I walk further on the path.

A building could be seen in the middle of the trees.

I slowly turned the handle.

The figure of a tall man could be seen as I enter.

His long black hair stretched all the way to his shoulders, his eyes were gazing upon the moon through the window on the roof.

I took a deep breath and aimed my gun at his head.

My finger was on the trigger, yet my gun was shaking.

I was breathing heavily,

I have to calm down,

Remind yourself,

Your family, your friends.

You have to see them again.

As I remember my motivations,

The gun was now still, my mind was now clear, and my resolve was now fierce.

Wyatt must die.

*BANG*

A silent bullet flew through the air, in a quiet flash it approached Wyatt at a terrifying speed.

*CLANG*

WHAT!?

My eyes shook,

Wyatt was able to parry the bullet with his sword.

"Wh-who are you?"

His silver eyes soon gaze upon me, as I got a clearer look at it through the mask.

They were shaking.

I gained my composure and in a second I was now in front of him.

I swung my dagger, with full intention to slit his throat.

*CLANG*

But in an instant, a violet aura covered his entire body, my steel blade wasn't able to pierce through.

I hurriedly blinked away,

Damn it,

I lost the element of surprise, this is really bad.

"Wh-why are you doing this to me?"

"I-I don't want to fight you,"

Wyatt's sword was shaking as he pointed at me.

I inwardly curse,

I completely look like the villain here,

My morality was causing hesitation in my mind.

I can't falter now,

[Mind of the Murderer has been activated]

My mind and body soon became to harmonize towards a singular goal.

Make Wyatt bend to his knees.

Soon the life inside my eyes disappeared.

I aimed my gun at Wyatt.

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

3 bullets flew in the air,

Wyatt hurriedly blocked them with his sword.

As he blocked, I teleported from behind and put all of my strength on my leg.

It merely staggered him, but that was enough to weaken his control.

I then aimed my gun behind him.

*BANG*

He was able to dodge to the side and it merely grazed his shoulder.

He quickly turned around and swung his sword.

I could feel the strength behind it, but all it was able to cut was air.

I blinked at his side and at this close, he wouldn't be able to block my bullets.

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

I shot three bullets consecutively but this time at the same spot.

The first was merely blocked, the second uttered a crack, but the third.

It completely broke through.

"ARGHH!,"

He fell to his knees while clutching his hand at his side.

His sword fell to the ground,

And life came back to my eyes.

As I approach him, he was looking at me, his silver eyes were gazing at my mask.

"Wh-who are you?"

I was taken aback, tears was starting to well up in his eyes.

Damn it, I could've just set the goal to kill Wyatt on my skill but my curiosity hindered me.

"Why Wyatt?"

"Why were you planning to brutally r*pe Xayah?"

His eyes shook, his head broke from my gaze as he stare at the window above.

"You were her bodyguard huh?"

I didn't bother to answer as I look at the pitiful sight.

As his eyes stare at the moon,

With a solemn voice and a broken will.

He soon opened his mouth.

"I'm not the only person in my soul,"

What?

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